a furious pissed off leiko hissing shouting yelling at her boyfriend hiro hamada WHAT THE FUCKING HELL IS WRONG WITH YOU I SEE FOR SOMEONE SO SMART my hiro can nr so stupid all the time i can't believe that you would go into an old house by yourself you could have died

shaking her head leiko gogo tomago hissing at her boyfriend hiro hamada what am i going to do with you why can't you see that i care about you that i love you that i worry when you do stupid things like wander into old broken down houses and get hurt

What was ip with the note? 0.0

Yes!
Great one shot here!
Love ya!

-PEARL-

So cute! Really liked Gogo in this! Really adorable, loved it!

Ohhhh that ending was so cute! I loved it!

Dang it, I didnt get to finish!
But... Oh my gosh you USED THAT IDEA! EEE! The "You'll find him upstairs" one! I think I went into another round of insane giggling when I saw that.

Construcive crit, I would strongly recommend cutting out the A/N except in the beginning and end. It can jerk the reader out of the story. And there were a few grammar errors. And I would have maybe drawn out the suspense a little between the time of when he crashes and when he contacts his friends, not make it quite so easy, like, maybe he's worried his phone is broken or he forgets he has it.
But I really, really like your description of the house. I kinda picture Honey as the one who would be more comforting, but you wrote it well. It was actually kinda adorable.

The ending was very good, both the beginning and end were very solid, in fact. And that ending line! I may or may not have done a little squeal/d'aww!

Overall, there could have been a little more suspense in him wondering how they are going to find him, but overall, I LOVE IT! YAYAYAYAY!

I loved this story! It was very beautiful! I like the way it is written! one of my favorites stories! Thanks for writing!

Wellll, you doing a victory dance is not as bad as me, who can't stop giggling like crazy every five seconds. Like, when I got your message about being an insolent fool I started giggling so hard my younger sister asked if some guy just asked out or something... wut... if that happened... I actually would be kinda creeped out.

So... story! Oh my... what a nice plotline? How ever did you come up with it? XD
OHHHMIGOSH!osh! Y

Sorry for not reviewing at first, but I love this! Awesome job, and it doesn't seem rushed to me.

Good job:)