| Reviews for Coals of Fire |
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Wolffie Baby Girl chapter 10 . 7/24 hope to read more love this story |
excessivelyperky chapter 9 . 4/10 Oh, my. What Sirius and James did was horrible. I'm glad that Harry can see it. |
excessivelyperky chapter 8 . 4/3 Oops. Well, too bad for Sirius. But I can see where everything is still going to be Snape's fault, somehow. |
Bellatrix grindelwald chapter 2 . 3/31 Right so I've read this fic so many times. I thin it's very well written because in the original books I don't really like Harry, I find him irritating and attention seeking, and I love Sirius. However, in this fic, you make me pity Harry and HATE Sirius. It's really well written. It's nice to read a story where a slytherin is a victim of a Gryffindor. One thing that could be improved is that there is a lack of significant female characters. I love this story, thank you so much. |
excessivelyperky chapter 7 . 3/29 Of course everything is Snape's fault, we get it already! |
Bellatrix grindelwald chapter 1 . 3/9 This story is really good, it's kinda dark, in a good way. I read the version on potions and snitches and this one is better tho |
Guest chapter 10 . 8/10/2019 OMG your story is amazing! Please do continue! Please please please don’t abandon this amazing work! xoxo |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/13/2019 i love read more |
Joe Oudeis chapter 10 . 7/2/2019 First of all, congratulations! Secondly I hope you're well and there aren't any real life trouble keeping you from updating. Because I would really like you to come back in order to finish the story for I couldn't find any other slave story that isn't either romance or with the slave bond demanding punishments and actively demanding something. And this one is good! Please do continue, I can't just read this ten chapters over and over again. |
Caramel4me chapter 10 . 6/20/2019 This story and it’s characters are detailed and very well done. I wish for more but congrats on your marriage! |
eaflower123 chapter 10 . 4/7/2019 I like your story. If you ever find time to update, I'll be glad to see more of this story! |
Mueckenboss chapter 10 . 3/4/2019 great story, please write more. |
Zorra Reed chapter 10 . 2/27/2019 I very much like this story. Has a few interesting twists and you write them so well. Look forward to the next chapter! |
Leah chapter 10 . 2/11/2019 Hi! I've read these chapters at least 10 times! I love the story, and I hope you'll continue updating it. I've read a lot of fanfics and this is probably my favorite one. I don't know why people complain about the rape scenes. There is a rape warning: "M for child abuse (Dursleys), corporal punishment (because of the bond), rape, suicidal themes" If you don't like it, don't read it. Thank you for your story, and as I have said, I hope there is a new chapter soon! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/30/2019 Amazing! I have reread it 4 times! Please update soon, I don’t know how much longer I can wait! |