Alright, so I made it to chapter 62 and I'm sorry, but the story lost me. there are some great bones to it for sure, but I've read some of your other stories and ADORE them, this one felt rushed in a lot of places and too slow in other places. I think that you're a talented writer and I hope that you come revisit this one and clean it up. There are a lot of plot holes and inconsistencies in the focus of the story that made it difficult to follow and appreciate even though there are some very good things about this story too.

I still look forward to reading more from you!

I am very confused by this chapter and the last one. is Jake lost to the wolf or to Taha Aki? And who is the "alpha" is that Jake's wolf? or is that Taha Aki? Also, why is Bella having sex with him if she knows that he's not Jake? Is that her attempt to bring Jake back? Otherwise it makes me really sad, it seems really out of character.

Nooo! I'll be so mad if they turn her!

I am enjoying this so far although it does follow very closely to the original plot. I'm hoping it diverts soon.
Also, can't stand Jacob calling her honey. It doesn't sit right with me. Everything else is great!

Aww such a great story!

So they didn't all burn

It's odd that they cleaned up the mess at Charlie's with a clear head before going to get Bella. I wish there was insight to that.

Oh goodness. I hope he takes it better in this universe than your first story lol. Poor Charlie and his blood pressure.

Holy crow, I love this!

I love your stories.

How can you fix a drifter? Rene just can't seem to be consistent with Bella.

I'm glad Jacob loves his surprise!

I think Paul and Leah will be good for each other please?

I'm glad Leah will have Paul, she just needs to accept him!

Wow how will that work if sue is in love with Charlie? Where will that leave Rene?