I'm waiting for Harry and draco interaction..

Snape probably raped her

Thank you, intrepid writer, for endeavoring to give Professor Snape a proper relationship this time, rather than with a student half his age. For this I am most grateful.

Please update this story is so good and can't wait to see what happens next

Interested to see what happens next

Good chapter. I wonder why Harry can't be in contact with Ethan and Ryan's grandfather .. It has to be Serena's father because Tobias Snape was a muggle, and wouldn't be able to perform Legilimency, and therefore Occlumency would not be needed.
And what was the thing about Dumbledore finding out? Finding out about Harry staying with the Snapes? What could he do, anyway?
I'm looking forward to Sirius and Remus finding out about Dumbledore and his terrible guardianship of Harry Potter. Anyway, good chapter. I'm looking forward to reading the next one. Thanks for writing

I really love this story. Thanks.

I enjoyed this update, thank you!

Thank you for the longer chapter! It was a very good one, as well. I wonder if Harry will take up the Snapes' offer of adoption, or not. If he didn't, I wonder how and who he would choose as his guardian. But then again, from what I see, Harry has no reason not to be adopted by the Snapes'. I'm looking forward to reading about Christmas with the Malfoys. That's bound to be eventful. Good luck with the next chapter, and thank you for writing.

Hey great to read another chapter! Thank you for continue it to update! Enjoy writing. I look forward to the next chapter.

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I feel like Serena is very to-the-point, a lot like Severus. I feel like they are very similar. I like the story though, and your characters. Good luck with your next chapter. Thank you for writing

re:Don't like, don't read
To quote TV Tropes
"This trope is most commonly used by Fan Fic authors who Can't Take Criticism and try to silence critics with this line (as part of a Bad Writing trifecta with Lets See You Do Better and You're Just Jealous). When "don't like, don't read" is used this way, the problem is immediately obvious: how is the audience supposed to know they don't like it if they haven't read it? The alternative would presumably be for the critic to not read the work and complain about it anyway. And a reader doesn't necessarily have to enjoy everything they read, especially if they think they can provide Constructive Criticism that will make the author's future work better, they find it So Bad, It's Good, or they can derive money or laughs by being a Caustic Critic. And just because you don't like the premise doesn't mean that you can't overlook that bias and comment on how well executed the work is."
We find your writing to be generally very good, but some of your themes leave us cold. Is that fair enough?

Loved it!

Complimenti, sono felice che possa stare con Severus.
Silente e gli altri pagheranno per quello che gli hanno fatto vero ?

Please do not have any male pregnancies please!
Squeezing a four kilo baby out of the end of your cock is no joke (even on April the first) - or out of your butt!
Magic can do only so much to repair the damage & hardly any writers are brave enough to actually do the dreaded birthing scene!
Do they finally realize the squick & trauma they could inflict & chicken out? Then why put original idea in our poor heads in the first place?
Use Penelope Clearwater or Hannah Abbot as a surrogate, & everyone is happy? ;)