I like where this is going. Indulging in some of your fanfics. YAY! Great job.

I am so on board for this road trip it is ridiculous :D Loved Sherlock's protective side here...you don't get to see it too too often but when you do it's v sweet and genuinely funny. This is also so well written- great turns of phrase : 'endured the hardship of self-procuring breakfast' and 'creeps like that won't back down unless they think you're someone else's property.' Really clever, natural style to this that makes everything you write a wonderful read. :) xx

Hahaha! *cheers wildly for Sherlock* this was so satisfying. ugh. Getting stuck next to someone obnoxious on airplanes is the worst. Loved Joan's exasperation- I can just picture her face. :'D x

Can't wait for Chapter 3!

Haha I would so pay good money to see Sherlock standing in front of the worlds largest ball of twine! More! More!

Aw I love how Sherlock gives that blonde twit Brittany exactly what she deserves (complete with the check out the guy a couple rows up if that's what you're looking for, haha, so Sherlock) and then the next day immediately figures out which guy was giving Joan a hard time and has to glare at him but won't do anything because Joan commands him not to and he respects that Joan is no one's property. Oh, God, a whole week in the car?! They're going to kill each other, haha. Can't wait to see how this turns out. Keep writing!

IM SOOOOOOOO GONNA LIKE THIS ONE!

- holmeswatson221 :)

Love it