I know this was made a while back, but I just have to say well done so far. I don't usually like modern Merlin but you've really brought it to life .. so much of my thoughts though this chapter was pretty much just me shouting at my screen 'just kiss already ' but yeah I hope you're well and in a good place right now..God bless MN out

THAT ENDING! T-T. So reading the sequel!

Loving this story!

PS I'm not angry at you. I'm upset with the story and the characters. Your writing is still fantastic.

Why can't anything ever end happy?! Why why why!? *sigh* I have no idea how any of this can be fixed. At all. Gah fine heading to the sequel.

Noooooo NOOOOOO NOOOOOOOO! Gah not the ring! What are you doing?!

Was not expecting that. Well the second part. I think that everyone saw the first part coming (except those two), but the second was a shock. I didn't really trust Morgause, but I wasn't prepared for HOW she'd betray them. Still yay to the first part. I wonder how long until it gets noticed...

So now we know how everyone is related (well the Pendragons). Also I really wanted to know what he said in 3. I mean, I could come up with my own thing but I really wanted to know what it was. And then this happened:
"... it manages to communicate in seconds what she's been afraid to recognize for weeks. ... the words he'd whispered as she'd fallen asleep the other night come back to her, and she knows he feels the same." Oh my gosh that paragraph! That paragraph! Have I said that I love your writing. I mean, I love all the fluffy good feeling I get from reading it too, but man do I LOVE your writing.
And I do also love your less fluffy moments such as the end of this chapter. You can feel the anguish and the fear. You have some real talent!

Oh gosh I'm drowning in fluff and loving second of it! They are soooooo adorable! They just fit and get each other! Wow two chapters in and I already know I will be rereading this forever...not constantly just I'll come back to it... It makes sense! I love the characters! They're the happiest versions of themselves, which is exactly how I'd want them. I also love how I don't know if this is a reincarnation fic or just a great modern version! Either way it's has been and is going to be great! I hope we get to see Arthur and Gwen but seriously I don't have the time to miss them because I'm too busy enjoying myself.

Morgana . . . gah. I HATE MORGAUSE! I HATE HER I HATE HER I HATE HER I HATE HER! Gah! Just . . . Morgana is doing the reasonable thing, but she sucks at communication. Thank you for updating, looking forward to more!

So Morgana has started the "lone ranger crusade" to protect her beloveds. And she believes everything Morgause tells as if they're all gospel truth. Poor Morgana. She didn't even bother to think that there are always the other side- that might be completely hidden from her- that will pave the way for Morgause fall. Ah, Morgana, there are people who would give their lives for you in the same way that you would risk giving your own life for them. Thanks for the update.

Noooo! Morgana! :( she has already fallen into Morgause's trap. Will Merlin help her, and will Arthur understand that she done all these things to protect him and family? So much angsty, but I love it. Plz update soon.

Oh dear. Poor Morgana. Poor Gaius. Poor Merlin. This is all a no win. Sigh.
Many thanks.

Morgause's is too cocky I think she's bluffing, or at least doing something illegal.

Wow! Good story! Can't wait to see what happens next!