| Reviews for The Chaos of the world |
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Jorkier chapter 3 . 3/30 I would just like to say I love this fanfiction. Now, I don't normally even begin to read fanfictions this short, but your Yuuma/Haruka really spoke to me. I love everything about them and love it when they show similarities to Reborn! Lots of SI-OC's are too bright, so I understand that to a T. XD I hope you have a great day and God bless you. :) |
Human Heart chapter 1 . 6/11/2019 Hehe *clap* |
ChaoticMinds chapter 3 . 10/5/2018 Interesting start! Is this one going to be paired with Tsuna, too? I must admit your other KHR self insert fic made a fan of that pairing. Tsuna "going for the jugular" in the budding relationship is very attractive. The whole competition between Reborn and him was funny, as well. xD Though I get the feeling Kaito would help Tsuna if he found out. -snerk- |
ShisuiOfDaBodyFlick chapter 1 . 6/30/2018 pls update soon! |
Asuka1920 chapter 3 . 5/10/2017 Can't wait to read more! |
fightingstoryaddiction chapter 3 . 1/17/2017 Adorable story |
sarahgri99 chapter 3 . 7/23/2016 Chibi yamamoto is bae! And yuumas reachtons to reborn were hilarious! Plz update soon |
Akun Saya chapter 3 . 3/17/2016 Wow, Reborn's grandchild. Never thought the idea exist. Sadly I don't like OC too much except if they are the MC or they made the story going nuts XD, so I can't warm up to Reborn's son very soon. But he's an interesting character. Reminding me of Giotto. I don't like anime quote very much because many of them are mouthful although you could made simpler one with much more meaning. But it's nice of you to share them. Are they your favorite? or are they connected with the story? I'm completely oblivious if that's the case |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/25/2015 Like a bat out of hell... Like a Devilbat out of hell, perhaps... |
TreesoftheWild chapter 3 . 8/3/2015 Very nice. Now resume the Tortue of Yuu-kun through cheery little kids and the sparkles! Great story! Hope you can get another chapter posted soon! Here's for hoping! |
Fai Senri chapter 3 . 7/18/2015 I like your story. Certainly Yuuma's character is a bit alike to Haruka but I can tell he's a bit different too. Haruka I have always imagined to have default monotone face, but Yuuma I feel by default is a bit like Ichigo (from Bleach), he frowns a little by default. I'm probably going to root for Tsuna x Yuuma though in terms of pairing in this story, Tsuna is just my favourite cannon character and I never liked how no one tried to help him from bullies when he was young. Yeah, he might have looked a bit pathetic but the fact that no one even an adult didn't help... I at least thought Nana would have, with how she was always shown as the best mother, but I guess just one person isn't enough to stop it. Kaito sounds really cool as well. I know I'm going to love interactions between Yuuma and Kaito. Can't wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! |
Viviene001 chapter 3 . 7/11/2015 When are you gonna update both? O.o Update soon!.' |
AnimaQueen chapter 3 . 4/29/2015 Is your story going be yaoi? Because I love yaoi. Update sooon |
Cogan chapter 3 . 4/7/2015 I like Yuuma. and Kaito is sweet. |
Deinokos chapter 1 . 4/4/2015 RIP stands for Rest In Peace. Piece/Peace. If someone was resting in piece(s), it would be more of a mutilated body than a peaceful one. XD ;) |