Those heroes are so incredibly airheaded, that it's painful to read. Also overpowered to hell and back. There is literally absolutely zero challenge here, the only way things could go wrong for them is if they behave in the most extreme of all stupid ways. Even then it would take lots of really bad luck to stop them.

What's wrong with all the people who need cheat codes to win at super easy difficulty?

I can't read it - it's too chaotic. I don't know what they are going to do tomorrow. I don't know, what is their end game - kill Scion? Endbringers? Travel to different worlds? Their 'funny' dialogs are distracting - a lot of 'jokes' not much of information. BTW who are his companions? Is Selene his girlfriend, Charles or single? Where they came from? This fic is going nowhere, the 3 MCs don't have any goals, any character traits besides doing stuff for lulz.

First, thanks for taking the time to share your ideas. I liked this story for the most part in the beginning even if I think the characters could have been fleshed out more. But it basically dissolved into the MCs giving everyone a bunch of powers constantly. They aren't actually doing anything anymore but that. Also seems weird that PRT would be alright with them messing with/giving powers to their heroes and Wards.

Isebas

Interesting as always and, just so you know it's actually your fault i started looking into worm in the first place. Not much i really want to read though too many people want to keep the grim-dark edgefest as is. Thanks for writing and sharing. I do so enjoy your stories.

Wait why does Power Manipulator not work on mc? the Cyoa says it can and mc didn't pick skitter mode. Pretty sure mc should be able to use the charges to give himself powers.

Mc seems to be missing a lot of his powers? Why does he need panacea when he has shaper? Where is the intelligence boost from Alexandria power? Pycokenetic should also be very noticeable.

No está mal.
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Not bad.

Me gusta la interacción entre Panacea y Glory Girl.
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I like the interaction between Panacea and Glory Girl.

Es satisfactorio ver a alguien pateandole el trasero a Lung.

Charles tiene poderes muy útiles.
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It's satisfying to see someone kicking Lung's ass.

Charles has very useful powers.

Not sure why pople still review this story,i mean,it hasnt been updated since 2015

Bringing the dead back to life?
Bad puppy!
Wasn't that Willow's big mistake? (or rather jerkhead joss)

Have fun just finish the fic.

To do list:
Get rid of the gangs - done?
Slaughter the 9 - did you get them all?
Kill Zion
End the Endbringers
Help Taylor - done
Heal people - doing, healing is an endless task
Deal with Eidolon
Execute Coil and those like him - done?
Have FUN! - doing a great job on this one...
Cut out corruption in Brockton Bay
Save the School by sacking the Principal - started but not done yet
maybe more...

I read your story where Dawn was sent by Stacy the Reaper to the Wheel of Time.

Could you write a "sequel" about where the dark and twisted hero girl ends up?

Thanks for writing.

Sadly delaying the release of a multi million dollar bounty makes sense.
And even banks don't always have that much cash on hand.
Most "money" is either electronic or tied up in investments these days.

All too much "wealth" is only on "paper" and comes and goes with the random walk of stock markets.

Who would win?

Slaughterhouse 9 or The ARMY and AIR FORCE?

I think the Armed Forces would win after a while...
Sure Projections are invulnerable, but the guy making it is not.
Eventually he would die to collateral damage.