love it! very sweet

Wonderful story again. I love that they hadn’t chosen Hannah’s name before she was born.

Oh so nice thanks for the read

I love this! I think it's a really good take of what their reaction could be, I don't know. They'd both be in shock in my opinion and you did a good job with that.

I was also going to comment on their daughter not being named even though she was already born, but then I remembered that I didn't have a name until my parents were leaving the hospital...so I actually really enjoyed that part as well. :)

So cute! Love it!

Awesome! I love your stories, welcome to the fandom :-)

So very good! Started off kinda rough - heavy emotion and all - but as a true Mentalist style story - light and now love has found its way to illuminate their lives. Great job!
Sugar

great story...great writing...thank you for sharing

Lovely! Such a cute story. Loved how you showed their feelings. Jane beeing scared but lovely at the end and of course Lisbon's afraid he'll run away as he has done a couple of times.

Avvvvvv this story is simply beautiful! ! I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks a lot for writing :)

loved it .thanks .

This was so good... I want to cry! I love this "universe" you have created, please continue :-)

Wow... It's perfect as a prequel to "Tell Her" :)

Perfect ! Thanks for sharing ! It was really great to read !

I really enjoyed this, it was very well done. Thank you for writing it. :-)