| Reviews for The Delegates |
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Wind flower chapter 56 . 6/16 Wonderful story! Love it |
Guest chapter 56 . 4/21 Love it! Such a brilliant story! |
Beatraoz chapter 56 . 10/3/2019 Such a lovely story! |
HeatherMegan chapter 56 . 3/3/2019 This was great. Thank you |
Deliah chapter 11 . 2/5/2019 Seriously, Hermione doesn't deserve this. Its evident that she's broken and hurt, and Ron is just being an egoistic prat to her. I wouldn't have expected Harry to take on such a passive role, but he is. The guys Hermione calls "best friends" aren't even there for her. She should whack them in the face with a broomstick and be the goddess that she is. Anyways, very well written story until now |
maria chapter 54 . 11/18/2018 it sucks |
MysterySpot chapter 56 . 11/9/2018 Oh how I loved this story! The characters were spot on (considering what they have been through and how little they sleep). I loved how much time you gave for their relationship to develope and all the interesting unique twists you put in the story. And the golden trio dynamics! At first I worried it was just Ron bashing or something like that but it wasn't and it made it better. Also Harry choosing Ron but still loving Hermione... I think you did really well showing how unwell everyone were and how it affected their relationships. I do wish there was a bit more to the end, seeing Hermione and Draco building their relationship, but I can see why you ended it there. Thank you for writing the story! |
spotterhead13 chapter 56 . 8/28/2018 Was not a fan of Hermione at the beginning but I loved her and her character development after. Loved your portrayal of Draco and Harry as well. Good story, great plotline and I wished there was more! |
electricprerogative chapter 1 . 8/24/2018 I LOOOOOOOVED this! |
DiagonAli chapter 56 . 8/17/2018 I spent the last 2 chapters crying ... you know the kind of years of frustration when you want to reach through the pages of a book and throttle the characters?! that's how I felt. . I did not enjoy the Hermione you portrayed, but that is not to say you misrepresented her. this absolutely could have been Hermione post war. I can only imagine that it would have been me. exhausted, emotionally drained, she would have been physically depleted after a year on the run. all these things leading her to be a less than capable version of herself. we see the real her in the final chapter: clear headed, not confused by simple conversation and able to pick up the subtle cues quickly. I'm a moyher of 3 ... 3 babies who didn't sleep for years. I can tell you as FACT that sleep deprivation leaves you a shell of who you really are. . I loved the idea of Delegates, of the first year mentoring group. I was sad that Harry didnt realize Hermione was a wreck, but we tend to miss that which is right in front of us, don't we? . I think this was an excellent rendition of post war reality. I would have loved to learn more about life after Azkaban, but it also fits to let my imagination full in the blanks. . great story. much enjoyed, tears and all. |
Guest chapter 25 . 8/14/2018 This is THE BEST! Awesomeeeeeee! LOVED EVERY WORD |
Vyvy chapter 56 . 7/27/2018 just beautiful! |
KelseighMarie chapter 56 . 5/23/2018 Great story, definitely a different take on what people go through after tragedy. Loved it |
Puppy13337 chapter 56 . 4/21/2018 Omg.. i loved your story.. so well written.. how it onlyhas under 300reviews is beyond me i wish it continued to dracos time in Azkaban but it was amazing none the less :) w Amazing |
Guest chapter 14 . 3/19/2018 This fic sucks. Your Hermione is fucking weak. It's not a good read. |