| Reviews for A Brief History of A Lifetime |
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Tee chapter 33 . 9/4/2018 No wait I just re read, that's awful Cartman did actually cry :''''''( |
Tee chapter 33 . 9/4/2018 o I understand that Kyle waited 7 years but he knew Cartman was gone into the future bro like he knew, so why did he still do all that? Find someone else, and rubbed his engagement in Cartman's face, its like he did that on purpose to Cartman. I know Cartman did a lot of mean stuff to him but bro. '-' and there was no sorry for putting him through no he stayed selfish and only worried about his feelings, Kyle was only concerned about Kyle not Cartman. I'm sure that's why Cartman cried a little (well almost cried) at the end of this chapter. |
Nightmother chapter 11 . 5/24/2018 Well shit. That was an emotional chapter. |
Nightmother chapter 7 . 5/22/2018 Ive obly just finished chapter 7?! Feels like i should have been through at least 20 with all these feels. Great work. |
Nightmother chapter 4 . 5/22/2018 Um well shit. Poor Eric |
Nightmother chapter 2 . 5/22/2018 I am just as confused as last chapter but i just cant stop reading. What is with the otters and time travel? Hopefully it will all make sense. |
Nightmother chapter 1 . 5/22/2018 I am so confused but i need to keep reading. |
Guest chapter 33 . 4/7/2018 ... Kyle's a real douchie douche. |
Guest chapter 33 . 4/7/2018 I read this whole thing...poor Eric, seriously poor Eric. |
JEC00k chapter 2 . 4/7/2017 Reading from Japan today! (Normally in in Atlanta lol). I only get wifi sometimes and so I keep loading up several chapters at once to read on trains and the subway. XD I love your writing so much! And this story is going to be awesome to read through. :D |
lonegungal17 chapter 33 . 1/24/2017 Wow, what an amazing story. You are such a talented writer, you took a small piece of a South Park story line and turned it into a roller coaster of a read. I hope you will keep writing fanfiction. I can't get enough of your stories. :-) |
BunnyWeasley chapter 25 . 9/8/2016 Duuude this- this really broke my heart ;-; the scene whre they fight in the hotel room was so intense, how they were both trying to understand one another. When kyle was saying how many years he waited i got goosebumps - i know that this fic is finished, but i wanted to leave this here anyway, im not too good at writing, but you deserve so much love. Reading this from beggining to here has been such a ride, a beautiful and painful ride xD thank you for delivering this to the kyman fandom! it is so perfectly written |
shecat105 chapter 33 . 6/13/2016 Omg it's over. I can't believe it. The happy ending we all wanted finally came through. Ho man. That couldn't have ended any sweeter. You know, besides the whole "gotta mention Neil ONE more time" thing. Screw his ass. Anyway! I'm a little conflicted now because it's done and I feel these feels. You know the feel? You know the feel. This fic deserves the top of the favorites list. You, my friend, deserve recognition for this fic. It's so beautiful and perfect. What else can I say? |
symphknot chapter 33 . 6/11/2016 OMG! I dont have words... This is so so fucking perfect! Im cry a lot... is so amazing, romantic, emotional, sad, happiness... The love between Eric and Kyle is so strong, that the time is small...and I like a lot the last Erics words about the time and the stars...and in other time we are so different, but we are here, living the present, and trying to enjoy it, is the only thing that we have in this moment...we have to live with all our dreams and make it a part of reality... Im your fan before this fic and more with this, because is one of my favourites Kyman fics...you are so talented, and Im so sad with the end...is a part of me :C, but Ill wait for more Kyman! Thanks so much for this fantastic travel in time, from my heart of lector and Kyman. Greetings! |
PartiPooper chapter 33 . 6/10/2016 Friend, I don't know what to say, other than I'm in a glass case of emotion! Seriously, what do you say at a point like this? It's the end and I'm speechless! It's your fault though, for writing such an amazing story which no amount of words will ever be able to do justice to! I'll try to express how much this story means to me though! I have to say, I love how Eric has permanently learnt the things which he temporarily learnt in the 'Go God Go' episodes: to be patient, and to not take what he has for granted; to wait for the worthwhile things, like chances and opportunities, and to properly love the ones in his life who deserve it, like his friends and his mother and Kyle. The way he seemed to so quickly forget and disregard those lessons at the end of 'Go God Go XII' was disappointing, so it's made me very happy to see him relearn those lessons for good here! You know how much I love Eric being redeemed, Friend, and you've really done it to a fine art here, maturing him into a far better version of his past self while managing to not sacrifice his character in the process. It's tough to do, but you did it. The same goes to Kyle. We didn't get to see as much of him as Eric, I don't think, merely because this was more Eric's story than Kyle's, exemplified by how it began and ended with him; but whatever we did see of Kyle was a great justice to his character. Even he, who is already so mature, you managed to develop into somebody new and better than before while still staying true to him. All of the characters felt right, in fact; none of them ever made me feel like you were projecting your own, personal ideals onto them. To portray and develop such a large cast of characters so well must not have been easy, but - again - you did it. Then there was the story! Honestly, I'm so glad that such a brilliant writer as you decided to do something with the 'Go God Go' episodes - a couple of my personal favourites. I can't get over it! There was so much potential there, and you fearlessly discovered it all. Time travel is so difficult to wrap one's head around, and, as such, I can't be sure whether everything you've written hasn't simply been paradoxical or unrealistic. However, I /can/ be sure that everything you've written /has/ made for one heck of a beautiful, interesting, powerful story. Unlike most other fanfiction, the progression was so unpredictable, it constantly kept me on the edge of my seat in the best way and always left me eager for more! It's obvious from reading this that you've put a lot of thought into it, and that doesn't go unacknowledged or unappreciated. This story is definitely one I won't forget for a long time - perhaps forever, in fact. It really made an impression on me, emotionally - it made me think about and feel so much; as I've said before, it had me questioning everything that was going to happen, and at times I sympathised and empathised so strongly with the characters that it almost felt like I myself was going through their trials and tribulations. Of course, your story has still had its minor issues, as any story, no matter how well-written, is prone to do. For example, what became of Navin and the other friends from the future? Eric was so close to them, but then they seemed to just vanish! Although, perhaps that's because after Eric's failed night with Navin, or due to Eric investing himself more in his mission, their friendship consequently broke apart? Or maybe, after Navin couldn't distract Eric from his yearning for Kyle, Eric decided to become more serious about returning to him, and so rid himself of such distractions and burdens as friendships which were bound to not last? Or they could have even simply grown apart as friends are wont to do! I don't know though. Another example is the otters. I thought they would be much more of a threat to Eric than they were in this story. Granted, I'm glad they /weren't/ too much of a threat - it saved us all from suffering a lot more heartbreak (we had plenty enough of that as it was, thank you very much!), and if they /had/ been more involved in this story then it might have taken /even longer/ to be finished - but it just seems strange how such a powerful, oppressive force in Eric's life was so scarcely mentioned and so easily dealt with. I'm not complaining though; those two conundrums were so small and insignificant that this story was still so satisfying nonetheless! I am not at all discontented with its progression or its ending. The way it has ended here is so great, what with the way it's just tied everything up together into a nice, tight bow, explaining how Eric came back into society after all these years without arousing suspicion (I do wonder what kind of story he made up about his disappearance! I'm sure it'd be difficult to explain such a long absence!), how he was welcomed back by his family and friends (I was so emotional during this part because I've waited so long for Eric to reunite with his family and friends, as you probably already know from me saying so before; I think it was one of my most favourite parts of this chapter to read about everybody just hugging; I even got teary-eyed when Liane said, "for years I dreamt you would come back to me," and Eric burst out crying), how Eric and Kyle are living their life with Paige now (I'm so glad that Eric managed to get along with Paige and they became a proper family in the end; and I'm laughing at how Eric's working towards time travel, because if only those sceptical scientists were aware of how possible a feat Eric knows time travel is!). It left no sense of incompletion. I don't know what else to say to reassure you that you've smashed this, other than I am chuffed as chips with how this story began, continued, and ended. I know that this has taken longer than you, or anyone, expected to be finished, and that you've had your worries and your doubts about it every now and again; but, despite everything, you have truly done such a remarkable job writing this story, Friend. I severely doubt that anyone could have carried out this concept as well as you. You should rest at ease now and be proud of what you've accomplished, because I can say with certainty that this is one of your most masterful works, almost bordering on pure poetry with how cleverly and creatively written it is, and that you've really evolved as a writer during the year it took to write this (you've learnt those lessons we talked about after all, remember). If you and this story don't go down in fandom history alongside the greats, then I'll be shocked (and I'll also start suspecting that meddlesome otters are behind it somehow, haha)! Even if it doesn't though, then rest assured that it /has/ gone down as one of the greats in my heart. It has consumed my thoughts from spring last year to summer this year, and it has made me feel all manner of emotions. I have enjoyed every word of every line of every paragraph of every chapter, and I'll definitely be enjoying it all over and over again for many more times to come, because there is absolutely no way I'm reading a story so magnificent only once in my lifetime. All I can say now is thank you, Friend, for blessing us all by sharing such a story which words can't do justice to. I, for one, am very grateful! You're a star! uwu |