Sad that you decided to drop this. Unless you plan on updating after 3 years.

Nice writing. Honestly very refreshing.

I hope Henry comes back.

Hey, why does Ally gotta diss my boy Rowan like that?

that was one heck of an awesome chapter

This has still continued to be one of my favorite stories every time I read it. Insurgence also got its long-awaited 1.2 update, so the game is pretty much complete. I'm not entirely sure if this story is dead or discontinued, although I suspect it, but if it's not, I would love to see more chapters. College definitely can get rough, but I admire your writing ability and the way to detail things so well that happened within minutes in the game. Please keep up the fantastic work if possible 3 ~Aidan

at least she got the badge, though I do hope Henry returns soon.

sure, he's a bit of an asshat, but so was Ash's Charizard.

Martin is going to get the Delta Scyther isn't he? If he's really going to be travelling with Alyssa, it would make sense for him to have at least one Delta Pokemon. Plus that would make for a fairly good/terrible pun since you said it was a "cool" Pokemon. If it's not going to be the Delta Scyther, I don't know what it'll be, but I really hope it will since I feel Martin needs SOMETHING to give him a little bit of confidence. And a Scyther, Delta or not, is a huge confidence booster for any trainer.

Shit just got real holy hell! Great chapter, Alyssa's commentary never ceases to make me smile. Thank you so much for including my OC character! It really means a lot. but v v

Nice to see this story back up. I knew you would get an Axew. Interesting fact, male and female Axews actually do have a difference in their tusks. I'm disappointed that you didn't finish the Suntouched Gym though. Seriously, it's taking way longer than it should. Despite that, I like everything that's happened so far, and I think I'm starting to see a pattern. Each of Alyssa's Pokemon have a similar personality trait to a character that was introduced in the town they were caught prior too. Prescott and Michael (or whatever his name is) both have low confidence and Henry and Ally both have over confidence and a tendency to rush into things without thinking. I don't know if that was intended or if it's just a coincidence, but if so, it's an interesting one. Speaking of Henry, I don't think this is the last we'll see of him.

Hernry nooooo come backkkk Alyssa get over here and apologize NOW. Aside from me crying over Henry, great chapter! Thanks for updating!

I kind of don't blame alyssa for crying when she released henry. she tried her best to train him but like that strange kid with the servine said 'some pokemon don't want to be trained'

I like Axel the Axew.

good luck on your college classes

orion definatley hasd a few screw loose

Hey there, I just wanted to say I really like your fanfiction! Alyssa is a great character and I think you do a good job of staying true to the real story while adding in a few creative twists. I don't know if you're still accepting OCs, or if your even still writing the story, but if so I have an OC if you'd like.
Name: Luna Zephyr
Gender: Female
Age: 18
Backstory: used to work for the perfection cult as a scientist researching delta Pokemon. Quit and ran away because the research began to stray away from delta Pokemon and she got bored. (An idea I had was that she created the starter deltas, but you don't have to implement that if you don't want to)
Personality: seems cheerful and polite when you get to know her, but when getting to know her you see that she's extremely calculating and will do anything for science. She is a scientist and her topic of research is delta Pokemon, so when she meets them she is absolutely obsessed with them and will often ask if she can dissect them to see their genetic makeup. She doesn't really care if she joins a bad organization or a cult, so long as she can do her research.
Pokemon: Delta Purrloin named Lily, Scyther named Shin
That's it for Luna. I just thought that adding a morally gray character into the story would shake things up. Please update soon! 3

I like it! You might need to get the next chapter out before i explode. Btw, Im supporting your story 5 stars!

:)