I think I've read this story over 5 times now...so beautiful, and extremely well written. I love the way you fill in the blanks of HLV, it genuinely feels like I'm watching extended bits of the show. Enjoyed it so much!

You're right: this was an appropriate place to end it - although I will miss reading your writing. Good job!

I love this so much. Your input of fantastic details made this quite enjoyable. Great choice of quote at the beginning, too.

Lovely language, thoughts, and character development. Worth reading more than once. Thanks.

This is lovely. I quite like the idea of Mary staying at Baker Street during Sherlock's recovery. Thank you for being kind to Mary!

I absolutely loved this. I just love Mary's character and am so afraid she will be killed off in season 4. I'm glad you wrote this. It weaves into the episode seamlessly and could very much have been a part of it. Everyone is totally in character and I could hear every word they say as if it were coming off the screen.

Lovely. Thanks.

Loved the dialogue between Sherlock and Mary. I like that Scripture is incorporated in the story. Great job.

So, so beautiful! Great job.