| Reviews for How Do You Quantify Perfection? |
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Ophelia chapter 1 . 2/22 Nice plot and it suits Drew. Great story! |
anjumstar chapter 1 . 6/5/2017 Wow, this was really intriguing! I've seen a few fics deal with what the coordinators go through after becoming a top coordinator (or, conversely, what trainers go through after becoming a champion) and seeing Drew take on this goal is something I'd never remotely considered although, I have to say, it makes perfect sense. Drew's 'perfection' is a common trope around here, but this is a very unique take on it! And I loved how the romance was on the back burner. Well, until the end. The end was awfully cheesy. It didn't seem seamless with the rest of the story, but it was pretty close. And yeah, it was pretty unclear that they were together for just about the whole of the story. I wish I had known that. That's probably what would have linked that last scene in better. I also think that it would be pretty unreasonable for Drew to not lose any points up against Robert, but I suppose that was the whole point of the story, so I can't really have too many qualms against that. Anyhow, I liked the story, I liked the take; you done good. |
Clara761 chapter 1 . 10/11/2016 one of the best I hv ever read |
An Author's Pen chapter 1 . 1/5/2016 What a fun story! Drew's search for perfection is very in-character and I love that he actually manages it. A few lines read a little awkwardly to me. In particular, when Solidad says: "You're probably putting your care into places that don't seek it, you know?" I understand what Solidad means, but the wording is a bit clunky, and what should have been a strong section ender lost some of its impact. The ending was very cute. |
Contestshipper16 chapter 1 . 4/9/2015 OMG! They were together all along! I somewhat realized it but at the same denied it, thinking confessions would appear at the end, nice twice thought! Plus, the environment, for me at least, when he won with no points being take out of his battle with Robert, for some really but really weird reason, I thought that in the end, Drew would appear waking up in a bed and realizing that he not won because he passed out of fatigue. I have no idea why my brain came up with that but anyway, this story was amazing! :D I loved it, I seriously saw all of this happening as a movie you get sucked into, it was amazing! Pretty sweet and super well written story! :) ANICA OUT LATESSSSSS! |
Tropicallight chapter 1 . 3/9/2015 that's awesome... the whole story is fantastic |
Farla chapter 1 . 1/26/2015 You wouldn't capitalize animal or mouse or dragon, so you shouldn't capitalize words like pokemon or pikachu or charizard. The only time you should capitalize it is if you're using it as the pokemon's name, ie, Ash's pikachu is called Pikachu. This is because you only capitalize when it's a proper noun, which are the names of places or things. Similar reasoning should be applied to any other words you're thinking of capitalizing, like telephone or trainer. Or professor. As to the storyline, I like it, particularly that the resolution isn't simply he should give up and be happy being more normal but that he actually manages to succeed at his increasingly impossible goals before deciding he should move on. |
Lapiz14 chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 Perfectoo! This was really CUTE! I kinda had a gut feeling that they were together from the beginning...xP Keep up the good work! :D |
Catherine45 chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 This was Awesome! I'm in love with this fic and your writing skills. Oh my! You described the whole perfection thing so perfectly. And Drew? He's so..perfect. Amazing work. Keep it up. |
Soyeon chapter 1 . 1/25/2015 This was actually perfect. 30/30 points. |