Ugh! Another beautiful story! I love your multi chapter fics!

I loved these last two chapters! I think the idea of this story and how it evolved were very interesting. As always a well written read. - B

This was great! The ending was wonderful, and they have a kid named Ellie!, I might be a little partial now, after my niece being born, but girls named Ellie are awesome! lol

This story has become one of my favorites! The ending was great! Loved that all my favorite characters(and many other good ones) are together, and they have a good plan for the future and a way to defeat the Patriots before they even get started. Haha...Miles and his Blackout sign. Will's semi full of supplies and Aaron's "That's not the truck I rented" was great and so funny! Loved the ending with the Four Horsemen singing as the lights went out, and Charlie and Bass having a sweet moment knowing that all would be okay and that they are together! Loved all the couplings and sweet, personal adoptions of the children. Charlie's lullaby, Charloe playing together, and the girls made a perfect ending. Fabulous job! :-D

That was wonderful from beginning to end

Hi Lemon... *very happy sigh* a wonderfully satisfying and yummily perfect ending... Loved the thought of the Patriots getting soundly thrashed before they even got started ! Yay! And that the Andover clan got theirs too! Loved that Will was a goodie and that everyone was pairing up nicely... Loved everything :) will read this again soon... Thank you! Magpie

Perfect end to the story. Just an amazing epic piece from you, Lemon. Seriously fantastic.

Oh yeah, and those names of the kids...Diana after Wonder Woman, very nice. But nothing beats the brothers, Billy and Dave. ;)

All right, I am a giant fan of things like this, the big reveal let's call it. I loved how they had everything set up and ready to go with as many things necessary to help them in the Blackout as they could. Thank you for including the phonographs with the crank; it would be the only way to have music after the Blackout, so I love that. You really, really planned this out so very well. I know I would have forgotten to include half of the things you did, so amazing job.

The interchange between Strausser and Miles...yeah fabulous. "This is it, isn't it? TEOTWAWKI?" "Teo-what?" As small as that is, I just loved that. :)

I love the whole set-up of this. You're preparing for them to enter into the world of Revolution in such a different way. Bass might be President, but this is a different man becoming the leader of the world. I can't wait, so just going onto the next chapter.

First off, may I just say I love that Strausser is a prepper. I could just imagine it of that guy. ;)

And thank you, thank you, thank you for finally getting Charloe back together! Yay! It was hot and it was sweet. And there were "I love you's". I'm so very happy. OK, moving on.

OK, So I've read the whole story and now I'm going to review chapter to chapter. So you'll be getting a whole bunch at once ;)

This was another great chapter, even though Charlie and Bass still aren't back together. I think they're both just suffering SO much. That being said, one of my favorite parts was when Miles gave Bass the box with Savannah's stuff. I thought that was so very sweet and hopefully, it heals Bass's heart just a little.

Awesome ending. Loved it all.

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I finally got to sit down and do a little reading and really loved this chapter! I feel like you really gave Aaron the chance to be on equal footing with the more 'dominate alpha males'. You are right, it is fun to think of all the different ways to take the story once they were 'prepared' for the future. I look forward to the epilogue. - B

Great chapter! It never really occurred to me until now that Flynn came to Rachel with an offer she couldn't refuse, much as he came to Monroe years later, and that they both bought his snake oil. Something else that makes Rachel no better.

Is it weird that I read that last bit in Miles voice? Lol great chapter, can't wait for the epilogue :)