I love the decriptions, and especially the use of repetition. Nicely done.

very very nice. I really liked this story. I am such a sucker for Ryo and Touma fics. Keep up the awesome work. _~

Awww! Kai! You finished it! YAY! That was so incredibly sweet! You're such an awesome writer! The way you described everything, I could see it all happening in my head so easily. Ryo and Touma are so kawaii! *glomps them* Congrats of finishing the fic. I absolutely love it! I couldn't stop grinning there at the end. Made me all warm and happy. _ Keep up the awesome work!

Love ya!

~CG

Your gonna keep writting though, right? Cause even though you are slow as all hell, you are a fantastic writter and well worth the wait.

Oh, I love it. And the snow, and the sweetness and the solution.

I really liked that Rowen actually came out and talked to Ryo instead of predictably angsting without any real reason for nine more chapters.

Not that I wouldn't have minded nine more chapters...

Okay, it was wonderful. Now write me another one. Feed my addiction.

Wow, this has been in the works for a whole year. Poor you. Glad you finished and are happy with it. I really enjoyed the ending. It was perfect!

Really liked the ending! It's a cool story.

DAMN! That was one of THEE best fics I have ever placed my eyes upon. hah. But, honestly, AWESOME fuckin' job. You get a REAL round o' applause. I got goosebumps reading it. This is definitely going on my favorites list and Im going to keep my eye on you.

More, more, please?

I want to sweep Ryo up and take him someplace safe warm.

Hell, I even want to do that to Touma and not many can convince me of that.

Ooh...maybe both of them at once. Angst in the comfort of my own home.

Oh the angst and tension in this is so thick! I can't wait to see what will happen next! God Ryo and Touma are just being the biggest idiots!

*Screams at Touma* "Just tell him baka!"

Keep up the great work! Loved the chapter and look forward to more!

Wheeeeee! Another chapter! Yay! Poor poor Touma! *pets him* I think he should just tell Ryo! I mean, if Ryo's willingly sleeping with him, I'd say there's gotta be some hidden feelings there. But all the angst just makes the story all the better. Hehe. And it was a nice try to get out of the house. Better luck next time, though. _ I can't wait until the next chapter is uploaded. I love this story!

Lovies!

~CG

Excellent! Truly excellent! The light touch of humor mixed in with all the conflicting emotions made the story come alive. It was brilliant, and I sincerely hope you continue soon. Ja ne~

wow. i'm really impressed bellz. i really am. now that i know that you can write something like this, i'm going to hear no excuses for not being able to come up with anything for aramanda...haaaa

Awsome! Hurry with the next chapter I can't wait to see what happens. Poor rowen, shouldn't have lied.

I love your style. ::sigh:: Can I have your baby?