This story is so good! It’s so compelling and engaging. I’m happy to have reread it

Porque não atualiza? Faz 4 anos que vc não faz isso. Quero saber o resto. Não passei horas do meu dia lendo a história para chegar nesse. Ia como Anna descobre o segredo de Elsa. E como a Elsa derrota Hans? Atualiza por favor porque vc sumiu?

Ahhhhh cadê o resto da história? Não passei horas do meu dia lendo para chegar nesse fim. Atualiza por favor, quero saber quando Anna vai descobri que Elsa é a rainha das Neves. Quero saber como a vigilante derrotará Hans. Vamos, por favor termina isso, já faz 4 anos que você não atualiza. Atualiza por favor. O que aconteceu, porque vc sumiu?

Ahhhhh cadê a continuação? Passei horas dos meus dias lendo a fanfic, só pra ver quando Anna descobriria que Elsa é a Rainha das Neves e como essa vigilante iria derrotar Hans (pois já suspeitava e tinha quase certeza que ele era o cavaleiro branco) mas eu percebo que faz 4 anos que não atualiza. Atualiza por favor, essa história não pode ficar incompleta assim. Não quando aí falta as melhores parte pare serem lidas.

I can't believe it's been over 3 years since I last kept up with this story. It really doesn't seem that long ago I was following the adventures of Elsa as she tried to maintain her secret identity.

So, after reading chapters 25-31 I have conflicting thoughts. On one hand I'm very sad to see a great project like this come to such an abrupt end with so many unanswered questions. Still, it was a fun ride while it lasted.

One thing I really like about stories revolving around a secret identity is the tension it brings to that person's real life relationships. This story did a fantastic job at times of portraying the contentious nature of Elsa/Anna resulting not only from her caonon-ish solitude but also from her decision to be the Snow Queen. My on complaint, aside from not finishing the story, is that we didn't get more of those Ana/Elsa moments.

It's unfortunate that you are no long writing on this site. Everything I recall from reading this story some years ago to my more recent finishing of the final 6 chapters has been positive. As a writer, the detail you managed to put into each scene made it easy to follow and even picture as though it was playing on a screen.

Hi! I've been reading your fanfic for awhile and it is wonderful how you're managing to bring disney characters into the story so organically. I must admit I enjoy the plots a lot, everything about them keeps me reading further and further. However the pacing of the writing bothers me a little. Even in action scenes, it seems to be too much words.
Anyway, I hope to have more updates soon! Can't wait for my girls to be together in this secret so we can have more sisterly scenes.

Please please PLEASE finish this story !

Sorry, I should have reviewed the earlier chapters but I wasn't quite sure what to say. As in, I like your story, but I wanted to say more than "i like your story". It's fantastic, and I love where it's headed. The only thing I haven't really liked was how quickly Flynn found the Ice Palace. if it were that easy to find, wouldn't the White Knight have found it? of course, he might already know but has no reason to go there when he has Pabbie. I'm also a little curious about what it is that Elsa and Hans have against each other. in any case, looking forward to the next update!

Wow... Just wow
This fic is getting freakin awesome! It's like a more disneyish version an avengers movie!, you shoul write a whole team-up chapter in the near future, and if you are interested in another superhero fic, then you shoul read "Hiccup in a Flash" By Natan Fierreta, if you both could make a crossover with your characters, that would be EPIC!

Oh. My. God. This is undoubtedly the BEST fanfiction I have ever read! I usually don't like superhero stories, so I wasn't sure if I'd like this fic, but all my doubts were put to rest after the first paragraph! I just came across it the other day and spent the last few days doing nothing but reading it! 31 chapters in and I am just so enthralled I can't wait to see what happens next! This is such a huge story and it's so incredible that you manage to keep up with it all! (You must be a superhero too I suppose :P). Sorry I'm rambling, but just thank you so SO much for sharing this story with us!

WHHHHHHHHHHHHHHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?! Hans is el caballero blanco? didn't see it coming...
Can't wait to see La Arquera fighting along the Snow queen in the future chapters... And most important, is Cobra Bubbles sort of your idea of a Nick Fury?
Is he trying to assemble a team with unique abilities?... Something like the avengers?...
That would be... SÚPER INCREÍBLE!

A befitting end to the arc and climax in the previous chapter.

Although we knew Hans is the White Knight, there's the satisfaction that we've seen who he is. It's chilling when you compare his persona with everyone else (particularly, when he is "shocked" at what happened to Elsa and swears to find the muggers himself; very ironic) and then the persona he creates as the White Knight. I'm curious to see where the hatred between Elsa and Hans comes from since they have known each other for quite a while and how it all influences the master plan Hans has in mind. Operation Big Freeze, huh? It admittedly sounds familiar.

Also speaking of, the proposal was totally unexpected. I obviously knew it happened in the movie but happening right now was a complete surprise. If only Anna knew. Although here, Hans does seem to have some level of affection for Anna, even though he is using her as leverage. It'll be interesting to see how much Hans' feelings will influence his master plan. I can't wait to see Elsa's reaction to the proposal, although Anna and Hans have been seeing each other for more than a day.

Leiko Tanaka was awesome in this chapter. It'll be cool to see her again in future, maybe even a mention as a hero in San Francisco, or something akin to that. Knowing Anna, Tanaka's warning to Kristoff may as well be null; Anna may be a dork, but she's stubborn.

As for Pabbie, he is definitely treading in dangerous waters. Hopefully, Elsa catches him meeting with the Knight at some point since her previous interrogation didn't work.

It appears Cobra Bubbles will have a larger role in the second half of the story, which will be exciting to see how it relates to all the vigilantes. I liked the inclusion of Dr Jookiba and Elsa's hallucination of him having four eyes. That was cleverly placed. You've got to wonder how Bubbles knows everything. Indeed, they are in an interesting age.

This was an exciting first half to read and I patiently but eagerly anticipate the second half.

Come on, it can't be too late for you to make Elsa and Anna unrelated, can it? No it cannot.

AHA. Frickin' Hans. Great chapter.

well I think we all saw it coming but damned if it's not gratifying. well done