Reviews for Howdy Partner!
The Ancient Phoenix chapter 1 . 6/22/2018
I just met an Australian Sheperd today. Ain't that a funny coincidence.

Aw hell yeah! Now Texans know how to do it
xaandiir chapter 1 . 3/8/2015
This was a very entertaining story, though I was waiting curiously for whenever America would come in since for about half of the story was just the OCs interacting with one another. I didn't really catch on that Daniel was Texas until somewhat towards the end when it finally clicked. I was also curious about if there was going to be a sudden Doctor Who crossover in this story but now I see that it was just a hopeful fan who wanted to live out her dream of meeting the Doctor.

I also thought that the ending with present-Daniel coming back, and remembering after all these years to come back, was very cute.

I just had a couple small problems with the story grammar-wise:

When they were discussing the years and you had summer capitalized, when it should be lowercased, and Bridget said "the current year is September 20th, 2014". If she started off saying she was going to state the year, then you don't have to include the month and date unless that has some kind of significance in the story, which I suppose it did have if Daniel came back in present time. Maybe I would instead change it to "today is September 20th, 2014" if you want to be correct.

"…saying was true. I could help…" There should be a 'how' at the beginning so it goes "How I could help" rather than just "I could help".

"Hey, it's cool" There should be a new paragraph here.

There were a few other tiny errors but if you want to be sure that they don't happen I'd recommend getting a beta or someone else to read over the chapter for you before you publish it. I really enjoyed the story and I hope you continue writing!
AnAppleOfDiscord chapter 1 . 2/18/2015
Aw Danny, you gent you! ;) Love the chivalry, I can easily envision that. I also see him as a bit high-strung...ya know lovably so. Him driving up with the door at the end, just makes it for me.
I wish I could say America (and Americans) wouldn't use alien technology for a joy ride...alas, from our Funniest Home Video Programs-yes. Yes, we would. BUT, if things went wrong we'd fix it. Gotta say the whole "dude" controversy is inspiring! Hope you don't mind if I incorporate some angles of it-though in my case-it's gonna be something Alfred gets called by Tex and he (being the fantastic misunderstanding narcissist he is) thinks it's a GREAT nickname. And happily starts using it...(O America you have a way of taking the sting out of insults...you Yankee Doodle Dandy). BTW Love Texas fics where he's not America's kid (for some reason the idea of the States being his kids creeps me-Probably cuz he's a baby himself. And...it's just kinda creepy and confusing. Florida? Alaska? Hawaii? Does he just go crazy adopting? Coughcrazycatladystylecough. Hope to see more Tex, from you! : D
LeFay Strent chapter 1 . 1/17/2015
Wow, I'm so glad I came back and read this. This amused me greatly, though I was confused for a bit. At first I thought Daniel was Alfred, but then he introduced himself as Daniel, so I though, "Is this America with a different human name?" But no, America busts down the door, and my jaw literally dropped, and I had to pull off my glasses, stare at the wall, and contemplate life for a while. Sweet Jesus, but it all came around in the end. And the ending was perfect and had me applauding. I like to think that afterwards, her and Danielle had a nice chat. That would have been interesting to see, but this was perfect how you ended it. Also, kudos on making this as accurate as possible. The amount of research you put into this came across very well. It made Daniel's character feel authentic. I quite like your Texas. :)