| Reviews for The Courtship |
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Jet Set Radio Yoyo chapter 4 . 6/30/2019 I love this story. I love it a lot. I love how Sakura was buying things for the boys to put into her house to try and ease them into moving in with her. I also like that the boys actually got the hint and just moved into her house already without having to verbally be asked. I just love seeing all four of them happy and in love with each other. It's sweet. |
Blue-10-Spades chapter 4 . 6/29/2018 Wow, this was fantastic, thank you, thank you! |
Phi-Dono chapter 4 . 2/5/2017 So this is my first review in years. For this fic it is well deserved. This was something i needed in my life that i didn't even know i needed... I feel like you got everyone's personalities spot on. This whole thing was perfection... I love this story so much! And i want more of this. Perhaps not necessarily intimate moments but things such as the town's reaction to finding out about their relationship. How Kakashi's Hokage status affects which missions he gives the other three. Who did Gai go on that date with? These burning questions - and more - need answers. I will wait forever for them. That is the depth of my love for this fic. (Though hopefully i won't have to wait forever hint hint.) Thank you for one of my favorite Naruto stories in the history of ever. |
AyumiUK chapter 1 . 11/20/2016 And so, by reviewing in the wrong order, I get to use hindsight right on the first chapter! Or something. But really, it was impossible to stop and leave a comment in-between chapters. This fic is just that amazing. The humour, the PoVs, the pairings. The side pairings. The everything. Things evolved so organically. And the fact they're all a part of it, it's not a harem disguised as poli. (what would happen if they had kids? o.o) |
AyumiUK chapter 2 . 11/20/2016 Haha, the pattern. The pattern that led to their relationship. XD Naruto's thought pattern. |
AyumiUK chapter 3 . 11/20/2016 Ah, Naruto's less known side. He could write a book. Like, "How to convert traumatised ninja". Be it enemy-to-friend, or even teacher-to-boyfriend. |
AyumiUK chapter 4 . 11/20/2016 Oh. This! This pairing! This thing of beauty! So much awesome! It's like, my ot3, but with bonus Kakashi. That's magical. Everything is better with Kakashi. Except, maybe, angst. Gotta love how well you executed the PoVs. Sakura can only be subtle when it involves Medicine. xD |
ivegotpurple chapter 4 . 7/24/2016 I hadn't really thought of this pairing much before, but I'm really digging it. It is what I didn't know I always wanted, lol! I think I like it because everyone gets a slice of happiness and because Team 7 was a little too obsessed to just be platonic. I loved the POV changes, and how each chapter added a little more depth to the picture you were painting. The order was great too; it was very fitting for how things panned out. My only criticism is in the first three chapters, you don't meantion who is speaking in the first paragraph. You use "he" which is a bit vague until the other cues get picked up, and it would be clearer to use the name even just once instead of that first "he." But aside from that minor thing, I really loved this! |
Jo chapter 4 . 6/21/2016 This was really enjoyable to read, the different perspectives and character personalities coming through in each chapter. I also really loved (and was pleasantly surprised) by the fact this wasnt hyper-sexualised, or overflowing with lemon as is the case usually. It was well written and zi really loved reading it! |
tamer.of.the.wild.things.13 chapter 2 . 6/18/2016 I'm loving this :) Usually I don't like threesomes or foursomes, but I think this is rally well done and the way you present it makes it seem believable. I like how you portray Sasuke. Usually, I find him to be a jerk and honestly he isn't one of my favourites but you make him tolerable, if not even likeable; so kudos to you! |
jj chapter 4 . 2/29/2016 thats kinda cute lol |
higurashis chapter 4 . 2/16/2016 I've always loved SasuNaruSaku, my most beloved and perfect OT3 ever but after reading this? You've made me so open to the idea of this OT4. Original Team 7 together is just bliss and happiness. Like, I need more, a lot more, to this verse. I desire holidays and children and birthdays and random vacations. I would also really like to know who Gai had a date with. This entire thing was perfection, definitely a favorite and like I said before I would love to read more of this! |
Stunning Sunset chapter 4 . 2/8/2016 This has a very domestic kind of cuteness to it. Adorable! |
Guest chapter 4 . 1/30/2016 Yay! |
Guest chapter 3 . 1/30/2016 *snickers* Yeah, I can see Naruto being the one who's best at this sort of thing out of the whole team. Sasuke sucks at interpersonal anything, his skills being /very/ stunted and overall rather introverted. Sakura spent most of her youth shrieking unholy terror, mildly delusional, and fangirling unwantedly over Sasuke and punching people that annoyed her. Kakashi's social and emotional skills may be even more badly stunted than Sasuke's, except at some points in his life he actually learned some and/or how to fake them really well and ignore the rest, thank-you Minato-sensei and company. Naruto? Yeah he has plenty of reasons to have trouble with it, but he was always very empathetic, and compassionate, and had a lot of ways and chances to /learn/, as well as a willingness to, because he cares about people and not hurting them by accident even if he is still his terribly irreverent, ridiculous, brilliant self. And for all his displayed "childish impatience", being a master of stealth and pranks requires a hell of a lot of planning and patience to /get it right/ and that was just when he was a kid! He's stubborn and determined, and talks a lot, but not necessarily impatient when he knows it matters. :) |