Please continue with this storyyyyy

just found this, but it's super interesting and i'm curious to see how her not opening the fob watch will change things, so please update this again when you can! i'm excited to read more!

Good story. Hope you update it.

Omg I love bay! She's hilarious!

I'm glad she reacted how I would if a watch started talking to me. I'd freak out. Probably throw it, faaaar away.

*sigh* Sometimes the fact that Bay forgets the fact that the Master and the Doctor had fob watches too, and she heals abnormally fast and she also has a fob watch that is telling her to open it and still can't put the pieces together, irritates me. Don't get me wrong, I love your OC and the story is going along just fine, but really. You'd think someone who was thrust into the world of Doctor Who would consider totally crazy and weird possibilities. Then again, if I was her then I'd never consider if I was a Time Lord or something. Awesome chapter! The transitions were a little off, and there were some grammar and spelling errors, but I still thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Update soon!

It's an excellent chapter, and I'm thrilled that you're alright! I really enjoy this story, and I have plenty of patience. Good things take time, and are always worth the wait.

Ughh nooo time skipping! Spoilers AND confusion. Excellent chapter, it was really entertaining and I loved the moment Bay and the 9th Doctor shared. But if Max and the 11th Doctor become a thing, what happens to River? I wonder if the 10th Doctor is up next? He's definitely my favorite and I'm interested to see what Bay's next regeneration (since it's so obvious now that she's at least part time lord) will look like. Will it be Max, or someone else? How is she even a time lord to begin with? Did the Doctor know her before? Amazing work and I hope you update soon!

Max is Bay! Can't wait for more
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Exciting! I do so love a cliffhanger! Also, your English is quite excellent! I would have never known it was not you first language until you said so! As for any grammatical errors, what few there were could easily be passed off as typos. Rather common ones at that. If you're unsure of how to spell something, I highly recommend Merriam-Webster's online unabridged dictionary and thesaurus of the English language. If you would prefer to know the etymology of the word you're curious about, I suggest Wikimedia's online dictionary. Heaven knows it's helped me many a time.

I really ,really love bay so far. Shes really funny

great story!

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! The story is absolutely Fantastic and I would love to read more. Love the OC. Very good job haha. So get to it so I can read more Love!

Lovely, I absolutely adore this story so far, please continue it.

I can't wait till the next chapter!