This story was amazing but what on earth happened to Bowser Junior and the Koopalings? They were in Sm4sh as well!

This is pretty good. Your writing style is interesting and intriguing. My biggest suggestion would be focusing on creating a bond more between characters, although this is a pretty good start. Also, was that an asdf movie reference I saw? ;)

This is very sweet! The smashers didn't seem like much trouble. :-)

Aww, this is super sweet. I ship Rose and Toon Link as mother and son.

It was sweet, but a little on the short side. I think it would have been cool to see all of the kids going crazy, forcing rosalina to work extra hard to keep them at bay. There really was no conflict or build up here, but it was still a pleasant read anyways. Good job.

-Smash