OK, let me begin by saying that I am truly enjoying your writing. You have a style of writing that cannot be taught. However, I must point out a few things that detract from your overall product. Please watch your spelling! There are enough errors in spelling to distract from the story and that is a shame with a talent like yours. Also be mindful of your grammar. Some lovely descriptive sentences have been marred by clumsy grammatical errors. I also have a question for you: is Katja supposed to have a twang or southern drawl in her voice? I'm having a difficult time reconciling some of the things she is saying with her overall characterization and this would help to clear away some of that confusion. I hope some of these concerns are addressed in subsequent chapters as I really am excited to see what you do with your source material.

I want mooore ;~;

well that was just mean ;)

Oh c'mon ! Get to work already ! So you can make up for my sleep deprievement after reading all yhese chapters in one row ;p

The moment I read Lion spirit, I was like; Aslan! xD lool, now I won't be able to stop thinking of him like the Narnia lion

This is such an amazing story so far. Looking forward to seeing it continue!

Omg Omg Omg! Still loving it! Cullen and spirit friend to the rescue. So they tried to make her tranquil. I claim immunity

Dude that is a badass ability. To burn you alive from mthe inside out. BEAST MODE lol

AGAIN WITH THE TEASING!

Ai...

BUT... Epic work as usual X3

I also just found out about the Trespasser DLC yesterday myself... It just leaves me with MORE questions... LoL

I still love the story. Missed Cullen in this chapter.

That Tresspasor DLC for Inquisition looks boss lol. Have fun. I don't have it yet.

GAAAAH!

WHY IS THERE ALWAYS SOMEONE INTERUPTING?!

sighs... Sorry...

Well... Varric said it. In Thedas there will be a new genre... TOO EFFING SLOW!

LoLz why do you torture us like this?

Ah there's that beautiful dragon... hehe

Awesome chapter! I just hope Kat will see her brother soon. Hopefully...without Leliana interfering. Even if she knows... but no matter.

Keep up this epic story!

I really love this fic. I especially love Katja's quirkiness and you've created a really lovely dynamic between her and Cullen. Awesome update - I look forward to the next chapter :D

It can't stop here! This is really really good,

Oh my gosh... I just couldn't stop reading! I only recently started playing DA:I and because of this amazing story, I still haven't finished my first ever playthrough. Strangly enough also with a Cullen Romance... ...swoons...

...I should be able to finish it today seeing that I'm halfway to lvl 21...

Besides my obvious love for this series, you're giving me a whole new perspective to the story as I have only seen with proffesionaly hired authors to a specific franchise.

I am loving this story so far and you're sriously making me consider to play again as a mage Trevellyan... lolz

I'm just curious as to where her dragon is while Kat's parents are visiting...

Keep up the epic work and looking forward to the rest of this epic adventure!