Chaos

update please

Please keep going you have left me on a cliffhanger. I know it’s been a while but please

you are a great writer and i hope that you kepp on writing. yes i liked the you pov it was a good change

hestia

I know English is not your native tongue, so I can tolerate the linguistic errors. However, the characters in this story all act like 12 year old girls, and their thoughts sound like they were written by one. Numerous “anyways” and “k’s” during their internal dialogue, unnecessary captilization making it read like a text message, ridiculous 180s in established characters, abundant uses of cliches, etc. Overall just not good. I think you are projecting too much of yourself/what you think would be funny or interesting to read with these characters, rather than dissecting what actually motivates them and stays consistent in their actions and internal dialogue

I note the fact that the dots in chapter 20 take up almost half the page

Turn left on Main St and then your destination is on your right, the gun shop.

hello ! can you please continue ? im not sure about you, but i’m a secondary school student, and this is my only source of entertainment at the moment ! please continue ! don’t give up !

DID YOu ZHTATATTATA

For fucks sake that is Erebus the freaking Primordial of Darkness, hell not even Tatarus or Nyx should be as powerful as him. No one would even dare to attack him.

Please update the story

This is cool... Can you update more regularly?

anazklumos 14, stfu. first, you aren't an author on here because 1) I've read "your" stories, 2) you would have an account and not be replying as a guest

nice chapter for once