Hope to read more soon.

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Hello! I really really liked your story very much ! certainly the evolution of team 7 after their graduation is rather fast but with two sensei it is to be expected then it is good !
I am sure and certain that Danzo and Orochimaru were in collaboration during the mission which wiped out the ambu teammate of Yami, this old senile of Danzo has foreseen everything but he is dead now ! at the beginning I imagine that yami takes the place of danzo for directed root because where all will go its members !
in the forest of death i had my suspicions of orochimaru's obsession with yami when he licked him in the face, eurk, i imagine his long snake tongue and it's eurk when i think about it ! but why didn't orochimaru take him right now when he was already unconscious in his arms? recently I thought about looking for couple fanfiction with orochimaru for more fun and you just presented it to me on a silver platter so thank you! some may not like it but I love the new perspective !
You know how itachi won against Orochimaru when they were still in Akatsuki, I would think that Yami would not have too much harm against him since I am almost sure that Yami is more powerful than Itachi unless I deceived!
you know i like to think that it doesn't matter that a person has amnesia the heart never forgets and it seems that i am more or less right since yami is not at ease with her "husband" ! oh my god i laughed when orochimaru declared to be yami's husband! I may have said that I have suspicions about the snake's obsession but I did not really understand the extent! is he in love, obsessed, is he going to create a baby with yami, what he really wants because already he doesn't seem to want to own his body, sexually maybe but not for a change of body ! I hope there will be a story behind !
so how long will team 7 take to find yami, and yami will he find his memory and will there be a lemon between yami and the snake, kabuto is he jealous or does he take the fact that someone one stole his master's heart ! full of questions and no answer !
I sincerely hope that you will be back soon because it would be a crime not to have a follow-up ! so I wish you good luck and good luck ! bye !

Itachi should live

This was an awesome story while it lasted. Sad to see that this hasn’t been updated in a long time. DX I wish you luck in the future if you do continue this.

Sorry I write my comment in French without paying attention :')(I'm French so it's not quite natural to write comments in English'')

I had already discovered your story before I created my fanfiction account, I now take the opportunity to make a comment

I love your story, she's really great. Kakashi and Yami go really well together, and for once I like spiders XD
The story with Orochimaru is really good, even everyone suffers, it adds to the spice of this fiction.

I hope you did not give up your story and that you continued it;)

J'avais déjà découvert ton histoire avant que je crée mon compte fanfiction, j'en profite maintenant pour faire un commentaire

J'adore ton histoire, elle est vraiment géniale. Kakashi et Yami vont vraiment bien ensemble, et pour une fois j'aime les araignées xD

L'histoire avec Orochimaru est vraiment bien, même tout le monde en souffre, cela rajoute du piment à cette fiction.

J'espère que tu n'as pas abandonné ton histoire et que tu l'as continueras ;)

This fic is great but did I miss something w Yami during the fight w Zabuza?
Why didn’t Yami sense Zabuza or Haku before the fight? Why didn’t he use any of his MS or EMS or Rinnegan abilities during the fight or was he purposefully holding back and why? Is he trying to give Sakura a teaching moment by letting her heal his ankle bc he has no reason to not have chakra to heal it himself since he didn’t use a single jutsu in the fight! Seems like he’s being underpowered here as a plot device compared to earlier in the story (he should be MUCH stronger than Kakashi w those eyes), but I could be wrong. Sorry for the rant I really do like this story which is why I dedicate so much time to writing out all my minor annoyances :)

HELLO... IT'S ME... PLEASE HIATUS GIVE ME WHAT I WANT TONIGHT... OR WHATEVER YOU WANT.

Plssss update I love it. That EvIl ORiGinAtes

This is so good. Thank you for writing, I can't wait for the Konoha team's reaction to what Orochimaru did to Yami.

Wait...Yami was talking?

Very good

Liked the reunion between Yami and Sasuke even if the chapter was a little short for my liking I still liked it

This is AWESOME! Great beginning. :)

I'M NOT CRYING, YOU'RE CRYING! *distant sobbing sounds* man...I hope Kakashi kicks Orochimaru's ass all the way to the moon where Madara will be fantasicing about it and will kill Orochimaru and he'll fall back to the earth and explode and Kakashi and Yami will reunite and Yami will get back his memories and *slams hands on table aggressively* EVERYTHING WILL BE FINE AND DANDY! But...that's probably not gonna happen. Aa, you're so evil, Author X'D