I love the way you write about Vella's warm memories of home, eventually transitioning into her realization of the dark shadow constantly looming over her. Short but sweet.

I really enjoyed this, you have a beautiful writing style.

Very nicely put together. It's always nice to see little pieces of poetry for games here and there, and this is definitely one of my favorites. Well done! :)

This was a beautifully written piece: it clearly and emotionally captures the "awakening" of Vella's self-preservation over "honor" and "tradition". Great work!