please update

I was going to read the sequel, but this sheer bullshit with Danzo has from doing so. Danzo does not have that much power, period. Not only that, but the bullshit of failing the two girls, just because. I don't care if you have some plot or resolve, I won't read it. The premise does not make sense, and I'm not going to read through a bunch of stupid nonsense just so you can make up some bullshit excuse to justify it all.

I mean, some retired has-been shinobi apparently can overrule the fucking Hokage, leader of the shinobi village, lawmaker and ruler of the country. Yeah, pull the other leg.

Its too bad Sex Education never had a sequel, because it might have turned out pretty cool. I don't know what this story is supposed to be, but a fucking mess is what it turned out to be.

Question, how the hell is Danzo is able to change the teams and the things he done in this chapter? The only one who has such power is the Hokage, Danzo and the other councilors are advisors and don't have any real power change things so I thought. Could you PLEASE explain it to me.

When is the next chapter of this story coming out?

So like, is Daimao's Den supposed to be like, Akatsuki?

Great story. I really hope you update this story soon.

Gotta be honest Konoha going to "War" with a minor gang seems ridiculous. Like it's the kind of organization that should be fleeing in financial terror from Konoha. They have one peer as a military nation in Kumo no one else. Gangs should be singular missions for squads of Shinobi not calls to war. You say War I'm thinking Konoha is about to drop 5000-8000 Shinobi on someone.

it's all worth the wait my friend and oooh the finale oughta be good

Hey I wanted to say I love this story but I have a few issues. When will Hinata cut loose and sleep with another guy? And are you really going to keep Yahiko? He is so...meh. He isn't bad he's just not interesting. I think Anko should be paired with Iruka or Kakashi. Preferably Iruka because he seems inexperienced and Anko could 'teach' him.

The plot thikens.

Awesome chapter!

Really good stuff Dig...any idea as to timeframe for the sequel series ot another chapter?

I got to hand it to you man (or woman, not judging), between SE:AMS and this, you've got me hooked. I know you wanted feedback and tips about your writing. So I guess my tip is: Keep doing what you're doing. I love the explicit details. I love the character development (it makes every character you talk about special). And most of all, I love the grammar. Not many people know how to write using proper grammar, so it's nice to see.
All in all, just keep up the good work. Can't wait for the Sequel series.

So glad to see another chapter up. I don't mind the waiting (since I've held my patience far longer for other stories onot this sight) as long as you don't come out and say "I'm done writing for you all, everyone get the fuck out and go home" then I'd have to lie on the ground and contemplate on what to do with my life afterwards. Keep up the good work fam!

nice, teams 7 and 8 are here!