Reviews for Focus & Failure
DeepKnife chapter 2 . 4/20/2017
Awwww
This is so cool
The idea that Leo isn't the big tough serious ninja turtle all the time is really cute!
Never have I seen something like this (that's a part of the TMNT)
I love Mikey comforting Leo it's absolutely adorable
Love this story
Bye
BrightLotusMoon chapter 1 . 2/25/2017
*looks at the date* Whoa, I'm late to the party.
I really appreciate you writing this. I'm ADHD and autistic. I always write Mikey as ADHD. I mean, it's canon now. I always look for more Neurodivergent!Mikey fics. This little short was lovely! I will see if I can find you on Tumblr.
Pippinpoppin chapter 2 . 3/3/2015
This. Is. AWESOME! XD I wish you could continue this! :D Like, go into detail of how they gang helped Leo back on his feet...maybe get to the part where he tells them what happened. That would be awesome XD
Overal, I loved the emotion and detail in these two stories :) The plots were right on, and the characters with totally...in character ;) Wonderful job! XD
Pippinpoppin chapter 1 . 3/3/2015
Awwww, the feels! xD Great job!
Guest chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
This was soooooo sooooo sweet. 3 Perfectly canon. I love how it wasn't overly done, overly mushy...just shows that they care, but also know him well enough to know when to hang back, just being there for him without mollycoddling or condescending, trying to show him they still respect him as a leader, too...Well balanced. :)
Firebird Scratches chapter 1 . 1/6/2015
I love your description of Mikey's thoughts being like Pop Rocks, and his frustration with it. That totally reads to me. I kind of hope they address his ADHD in canon, and formally acknowledge it. It think it would make a lot of kids feel great to have an awesome superhero to look up to who doesn't let a disability get in his way.
MissCookiiie chapter 2 . 1/5/2015
Great chapters! Love it so far hope to see a third chap soon :)
Sesshomarusama3 chapter 2 . 1/4/2015
So beautiful!
Zelgadis55 chapter 2 . 1/4/2015
I saw the art done for this story over on Deviant Art and followed the tumbler link in eager anticipation to read the accompanying story. I was a little disappointed to see only part of the first chapter there but please to see there was more. Sadly, I couldn't find the rest for a few days but I decided to try again tonight and was very happy to see the link which either wasn't there before or I somehow missed, probably the latter.

Anyway, after reading this, I am very glad I tried again. It was very good to see the deeper thoughts and reactions behind events that were left without follows up by Nick. I very much enjoyed this and I hope to see more from you :-)
BladedBlossom chapter 1 . 1/4/2015
Awww. Nice and fluffy. To be fair, Leo's brothers give him a hard time about leadership, so there's a lot of mutual tearing down going on. But I appreciate the understanding everyone has come to about Mikey's disorder and that the brothers never meant to break his heart and make him feel worthless.
bookworm563 chapter 2 . 1/3/2015
I loved these two stories! They were so sweet and heart-warming. Great job! :)
bookworm563 chapter 1 . 1/3/2015
Aw! That was so sweet! I love brotherly fluff!
PhGim.7 chapter 2 . 1/1/2015
LOVE this story :)
BubblyShell22 chapter 2 . 1/1/2015
Awesome chapter. Yep, Mikey would know what Leo's going through so it's nice to see him comforting Leo in his time of need. Nicely done on this. I loved it.

The Bubbly One,
Shell
BubblyShell22 chapter 1 . 1/1/2015
Awesome story here. I loved it and can see Mikey feeling this way. Donnie found out what was going on and found a solution to it as always. Nicely done on this. I'm off to read the next chapter.

The Bubbly One,
Shell