Love love love love you magical duck

GAAAHHHHH PERFECT

Love it. I wished it played out this way. I hated how rory changed around logan

Oh I loved this! If only it could've happened this way :)

So cute! I loved this! You did such a good job!

Hey Red,
I thought you did a great job, especially integrating your own bits to the scene from the show. My favorite part was when Lorelai was asking her why she was in Philly :)

Fantastic! This is what should have happened!

I enjoyed it, thanks for posting.

I agree with the other reviewer on here. While I do think she cared for Logan, I think she loved the idea of loving Logan, more than she actually, truly loved him. Great job. This scene breaks my heart on the actual show, I like this ending a lot more. Would have been great to see the conversation with Logan. My only problem with this whole fic is that I am not so sure that Rory would have broken up with Logan over the phone, she never struck me as that type of person. Then again, Rory did a lot of crazy, uncharacteristic things between seasons 5/6.

welcome back to FF. I just came back as well after a 7 year hiatus (from when I was like, 14/15) and updated an old story, Exchanges on a Rainy Afternoon. It's really funny because the first two chapters were clearly written by someone significantly younger than the person who wrote the final chapter. So I definitely know where you are coming from with getting over that initial hump. But welcome back! You're a great writer, and I love reading Literati fanfic.

xoxo

I liked it. I am a firm believer that she never loved Logan the way she should have and I think you brought that out well.