You should make a sequel

The last part had me laughing. You poryrayed Law well, but I would've like to see Cora appear (don't mind it it's my fangirl side). Though the ending left me wanting a sequel.

A sequel would be nice.

"Was this the power the illogical soulmates held?" That had me laughing...so hard... XD Ah! I loved this! You're really, really good at writing Law! It's a shame you don't write more LawLu. :] But the idea was nice and the story was cute! And haha, yeah, good thing Corazon wasn't around. He WOULD have caught something on fire. XD

Anyway, nice little one-shot! I really enjoyed reading it! :D

Awe this is so sweet. Is it going to be a multi chapter story? I hope so because I'd love to see where this goes!

SO CUTE! I want more. LOL. :D

I like LawLu a lot, and this idea is interesting. I love you for putting Cora-san (in a way) and Lamie here! Good way for law and Luffy to meet, and it's lovely how Luffy affects Law by just being himself even when they've barely met. Even if it's not your OTP, you did a good job with this couple :D

this is so great!