For the 10th time I’ve read your excellent stories. Thank you!
Julieta

Great chapter. It's a shame there wasn't something like this in one of the episodes; it probably would have slowed the pace of the tv show too much, but it's nice to see Michael's loyalty emphasized.

Hi, This is the first time I've read your work. Though usually I'm not a fan of one shots or small pieces these fit in so well. My daughter and I are just finishing up a weekly marathon of Burn Notice so all of this is very fresh in my mind. You've captured Goldburg's style very well. I enjoy seeing writers explore different styles from time to time. The fact that you did such a beautiful job shows how talented you are. It can be a very difficult thing to do.
After Burn Notice we'll be attacking Touching Evil for our next marathon. Love Jeffrey Donavan's work. I believe he's one of the best actors there is. Perhaps you might want to try the same thing with that show. I'll follow you to see what comes up. Thank you.
I look forward to reading more of your work. Thank you

Lovely chapter:)

I'll confess I was a bit wary to delve into this new chapter at first, only because I'm one of those people who still has a hard time dealing with Season 7. But my fears were totally unfounded, because I thought you did a great job of adding some much-needed context and humanity to this sequence of events while not shying away from the real (and heartbreaking) practicalities and emotional stakes. I also thought you captured the Goldberg style very well, and were, as usual, great with the dialogue. So glad you decided to update, both because this chapter was so good, but also because it gave me an excuse (or reminder) to revisit the previous chapters, which are all excellent. Though it's hard to choose, I think I like Chapter 3 best; I've often tried to think about what else Michael and Fiona would have talked about during that prison visit, but nothing I've ever come up with sounds as right as what you did. Thanks for sharing! :)

Really really good! I'm rereading your 5 chapters several times. Do fill in more scenes such as before hospital and after waking up in hospital after he got shot. You do a great job. Julieta

I love the Tod Goldberg novels too. Enjoyed your take on the missing scenes.

How depressing! Season 7 was the worst! I much prefer the AU of Its Not Over (when is that going to update by the way?)

I also like the Todd Goldman books so I liked your new way of writing. Michael's snark is what grabbed me about BN in the very first scene. I did not think though that Todd had a very good handle on Fiona but I am sure you will. Thanks for continuing to write about BN for us. I get very excited when I see a new chapter pop up.

Great story! Excellent "in between '. I like the way you really got into Michael's head. Keep writing extra parts of the episodes. You are always in tune with how the characters think.

Great chapter! I like the new style, definitely fits the mood of the timeframe. Hope to see more soon!

I've always enjoyed imaging what went on off screen. Thank you for your fine contribution to those Behind The Scenes moments. Any chance of some more Teachers and Students?

Really enjoying these so far! Hope they keep coming!

Funny and exactly to character. Enjoyed it.

One of my favorite stories ever. Need chapter 2. Feeling awful for almost a mostly at home under watchful eye and care of Sam and Fi. Three doses (and no water or food) was way too much. After effects are no fun. Julieta