I love it !

Genial lf

I think this one could be carried on I hope you will consider this I like writing and I look forward to your links when they come. Thank you for the read

Loved this take!
Especially the part with the ring, it was always a sensitive issue...and he wants to changers for her...that's true love! :) Erica could never invoke such reactions from him, no one except Lisbon

Really really enjoying reading your work!

Love the insight we didn't get to see in this ep of the show! As always you write it so real.I can imagine something like that on the show!

This was a good tag. I love the fact that you didn't go out of your way to explain every little feeling Jane had for Erica and even for Lisbon. Jane's thoughts did not go into a deep dark territory, but I felt the significance and the depth of all the little changes Jane thinks about, in the way you wrote them. You have a knack for saying a lot of things in simple and attractive ways. Good job!

Awww very very good! :)

I enjoyed this, nice tag. :-)

I am glad I am not the only one to have seen chemistry between Jane and Erika. Some people refused to admit it at the time. Great tag, and I totally agree with your insights.

Wow. I love this piece. (:

Excellent story, looking forward to reading more.

This was a very good look of Jane's point of view about their relationship.

This is really good. You're infusing more meaning and depth into the episode than was ... apparent. (If it was there, it wasn't so obvious.) Your Jane stream of consciousness is right on target. Maintaining his habit of secrecy would be distancing and an invitation to suspicion and misunderstandings. Good grief. The entire time since Green Thumb is a series of serious misunderstandings initiated and fueled by failure to honestly talk with each other. Thanks.

I love reading about their thoughts and reflection of what happened in the show. You definitely pointed some things out that I didn't notice at first. Thanks for writing this! Loved it :3

Nice analysis. I enjoyed this!