This fic is really good! I'm not a big fan of stories where the OC experiences almost everything alongside their intended love interest, but this one is written well enough for me to continue reading, despite my aversion. It helps that Rose is very interesting too

I'm hooked already! I hope Rose will get her memories back along with Jack's memories!

I think you should write more when you can as it is really good so for, please and thank you.

Greetings again! It's been a while, but it's always nice to see an update to a great story. I must say you've done extremely well on this chapter (especially the sleigh ride - hilarious!). And not to worry about life happening - I can relate. I look forward to more!

Bonne Chance,

VR

Dude, this is soooo amazing! Please keep up the awesome writing.

You are doing an amazing job! She reminds of Lava Girl lol

this story of your is really well done and informative too, good job and i understand the busy life of a writer soo yeah XD

I must say it is very nice to find this wonderful story here on FF dot net. I think you are working your story ideas into the ROTG universe quite nicely. As a long-time (18 yrs) veteran reader and reviewer of material on this site, it gives me joy each time I discover a new well-written story to read. :-) The details have been well-thought out, and the pacing of events is very good. I hope that you stick with it all the way to completion, as it is one of the stories that I rate as being in the top 10% on FF dot net. Great job, and looking forward to reading more!

Bon Chance,

VR

OOH Sabriel, i've read that book twice. its a good story , part of a good series if you want a little darkness.

and there's some of what i saw in the last chapter , the summer and winter Spirits will be able to be there to calm each other down , they're a match for each other... she became a Spirit for Jack. though i thought it would be Rose to calm down Jack first instead of him calming her.

or will North supply her with portal snow globes ?

so when she becomes a guardian , does she travel with Bunny to North's place?

Jack's staff is what he used to save his sister and her's is the wood that pinned her down , effectively killed her.

oh Jack , ( shaking my head at this.) your going to be kicking yourself in 200 years if you forget her

i'll some time listen to songs while i read and i have celtic women singing Teir Abhaile Riu and it goes well with the beginning of your story. and Nil Se'n La , and the voice that's another song of theirs.
'the voice' kinda goes with the fore shadowing of the summery

so that's how she became the Guardian of summer. Jack died in an icy pond saving his sister , and Ana dies in a fire. Fire and Ice , Summer and Winter. and the last thing they saw as mortals were their family and the moon

Nice JOB! XD

DorkaliciousGeekGirl

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! 'Nough said. ;)

Ps I know you just updated but I love this story!