This is honestly the best Solas/Lavellan story I’ve read, and I’ve read a lot! I absolutely love how you tied it all together and managed to make the romance even deeper. Well done!

Oh I'm torn by this. The dream was made all the more tragic, if that was even POSSIBLE!

Oh, that soul mate line was a killer to my heart *clutches chest*

I appreciate and love how they've made their love known but they've only gotten as far as kissing. Sometimes that's all you need in the beginning.

That part with her cleaning his home with her clothes is subtle but strong. Raised to obey a command in any way, of course she would use her clothes. I would never have thought of that.

Wow. You absolutely nailed just everything in this story. And the ending! Well, I didn't need a heart anyway. Great job on making Solas lovable and infuriating all at once, just like canon. :)

I see that it ended with more tears and heartbreak. Solas loves Lavellan so much but pushes her away in every turn. A sad pair that deserve happiness. But Solas is kept in well in characyer by not falling in a happy end with Lavellan. It's a brilliantly written story. Thanks for this..

Brilliant chapter. Solas's pain is palpable. Mercy on his soul. Hoping this story has a happy end for him and lovely Lavellan...

The moments in this one are heartfelt and beautiful. Cassandra learns of their relationship, wonderful development

This chapter has a rush in it, the reason could be the tight following in the story of the game. It is entertaining still...

Moving into the Inquisition storyline, Solas is struggling, you have written him so well. The story keeps on getting more interesting...

Wonderful chapter, their union in the end is gratifying, truly.

Andruil or Lavellan huh. Lovely chapter, the kiss from Adruil is a surprise. Fen'Harel and Lavellan on the throne, the image is burned in my eyes. They are beautiful...

Your Lavellan is stunning with the air of innocence enveloping her. It's beautiful, this building relationship she has with a god. The prose is quite captivating too...

Great start. The summary alone caught my interest. And the first chapter didn't disappoint. I'm eager to read on...