I tried I really really tried, It's a good idea. But this is just unreadable. there is no structure to anything it's just a verbal diarrhea. Try reading every paragraph back to yourself once you write it.

eww no i carnt read this i aint gay i am into pussy not cock eww hust damn nasty

i hate mommo azians goffer muppet

god i hate azian devil incarnate i hope he roasts in hell in incrusating pain for all eternity the rat face bastard he is

*sigh* this would have been good except it has that gay crap in it, but I guess I can never find something with a good concept and not have something else to throw me off it. I spend hours upon hours looking for something good. I like literally have ** requirement for me to read something. I have to know the source material (enough to get the jist of it). It has to have at least 100K words, or it's usually not developed enough to read. No weird crap (yaoi, gender-bender, weird sexual shit). The final thing is that I want a character I can put myself in, which I can't really do if most of the time...

The Menos should be shitting himself at a lieutenant level shinigami going shikai. it's complete overkill.

What happened to Gin?

Had I found this when it was still incomplete and the voting was still on, I would've voted for Kisuke Urahara or Gin Ichimaru. I like them best for Ichigo.

I have really enjoyed reading this and I loved your Ichigo. I hope you write another story like this. I like Ichigo as the seme better. It would be cool if in a different story where he didn't become an arrancar the soul king wants him for something

I'm really enjoying reading this but I don't know what to make of Ichigo's bankai. I don't understand why he doesn't have a sword in his hand at all so I am hoping that he will have one when it is complete. I'm also curious about Hogyoku part in this and if she has a part since she is now part of his soul. What happened to Ichigo's parents? His mother could not possibly still be alive and where is his dad?

I'm confused about Ichigo waiting 50years, wouldn't his parents or at least his mother have died unless she is like 80 years old?

ichigo/zangetsu/dark ichigo. :P hahaha

IT'S SOOOOOOO NICE AND I ACTUALLY CRIED

AGHHHH THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL I'M CRYING HELP
Your writing has improved so much over the course of this story. Congratulations on finishing it! :3 Of course I'm a bit late with this, but still.

Noooooo! Goddamn it, Aizen! Normally I like Aizen's character but he's just a jealous stalker in this fic. The angst in here was beautiful, though. I miss Urahara already and we've barely seen him these past few chapters. And last chapter was so heartwarming, too...