Someone has tampered with Death's plan and now his "champion" for lack of a better word is going to work on he case.

Please update your story soon!

The grammar and spelling is atrocious but I’ll try to work through it

This part is the most ridiculous reason ever. This is why I don't watch tv shows anymore they are to sappy and take away the good plotlines that books have.

she is dead wddyyyymmmmmmmm. Ghost is a type of spirit they don't have heart. they are ethereal

WE WANT MORE RIGHT NOW PLEASE AUTHOR PLEASE

Please update, or I will use this story in all with exception of incest thing if I start with FanFictions and AO3's. Everything is so good (with exception incest) to stop writing.
PS. I can't see answers so, please, write your answer though review because I don't want people to see my gmail. Bye.

Update plz

Look good idea for a story and your lemons are better than others but your story writing need work it doesn't flow. So work on that and you would be a great author

he seemed to only use snapes spell

damn this harry is useless why wont he use his old magic at all

too many flashbacks and why did you add high school dxd characters

Okay cool chapter but I cringed for most of it, plus the grammar is kinda iffy.

I read this story so many times I got the plot but you haven't written the conclusion. Will they vanquish the succubus or will they take over her harem? I don't like the idea of them taking the harem but vanquishing her seems much better. I think I remember The episode but try another episode after vanquishing her. I Ike the goddess episode too. And the one where they get sucked into the past or the was funny. Please continue with it. I know there's much taboo but I really don't care! Just get rid of that bitch succubus and get on with a new episode.

way better than the version on hpfanficarchive , like how it doesn't include the useless detail about him being circumcised - made me flinch reading that shit on the other site - like why wouldn't you magically protect your penis? lol