| Reviews for Phyllis |
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   irusita chapter 1 . 10/12/2018 lovely story! thank you! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2015 Oh... so cute. Love Phyllis! |
| sell chapter 1 . 12/29/2014 Heck, Google translator worse. I was looking at the translation and was crap! What I meant was: How about another chapter of 'The road to Emmaus'? |
| sell chapter 1 . 12/28/2014 such that most chapters of 'road to Emmaus'? |
| Hazmatt chapter 1 . 12/22/2014 Great story! I really enjoyed it! |
| Dianna chapter 1 . 12/13/2014 Thank you for this sweet story, I enjoyed this! |
| sell chapter 1 . 12/7/2014 The bad I could be on the site only twice a week is that I always end up being the last to arrive at the party. I can almost see a character like Philliys the show. Bobby could be so lovely to people he saw frequently, as that waitress at the restaurant he used to dine. It was a simply lovely story and I'm very happy that you're a CI writer, and happier than I have been one of his readers the 1st. What more can I ask for? Continue writing stories with Bobby Goren. More, please! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/7/2014 That's delightful! Charming and well-paced. |
| westwinder chapter 1 . 12/5/2014 That was terrific! Phyllis is a treasure. I love stories where they're observed. Great fun-nice job! |
| andanewday chapter 1 . 12/4/2014 Well done, I really like this. Quite an interesting perspective and the subtlety suits these two well. I think the story progressed rather nicely. Thanks for sharing. |
| momandwife33 chapter 1 . 12/4/2014 so glad you have continued to write CI. I like how you treat our heroes equally. So many are Goren centric and you give both the limelight. Please keep them coming. |
| obamagirl chapter 1 . 12/3/2014 Awww- love it! |
| leftyred chapter 1 . 12/3/2014 You're right! I really liked this story. Unique perspective. Thanks for writing. |
| rindy713 chapter 1 . 12/3/2014 nicely done! very creative idea! i enjoyed seeing bobby and alex through phyllis' eyes. and i love all the subtleties she observed. it was sweet how she helped smooth things over when bobby got so excited talking about alex. and i loved how she dug those keys out and got them back to him. and, of course, how she noticed that they were a couple. there are so many people who expertly do jobs that smooth our path, and we never notice how good they are at what they do. this story is a tribute to all of those people - no doubt some of whom are your readers! |
| mrsking1976 chapter 1 . 12/3/2014 I like Phyllis. I like the observations of these 2 from someone else. Now how about you do one from Logan's pov. |
