Reviews for Holy Matrimony
Alyce Reide chapter 1 . 7/7
I subscribe to the Air Nomad theory.
The Weaver of Stories chapter 1 . 7/2
Offensive and hilarious. One of my favorite stories. As a die-hard Kataang (yes, the Taang incident horrified me to no end. And Zutara gives me the willies.) But yeah, die-hard Kataang loving a Zutarian story. Speaks to your writing.
TheoMidnight chapter 1 . 3/6/2019
Suki is terrifying
Kronus96 chapter 1 . 3/3/2019
Suki calling Sokka an infidel is the highlight of my day. Their part was the funniest.

Toph and Aang... Raising their children will be an experience.

Ty Lee is high as a kite. I knew it in my heart all along. This part didn't stick out as much as the other sections, but it was still funny.

The end was pretty sweet. It hadn't occurred to me the problems that must’ve arisen when the nations began to connect more.

Thanks for writing.
Samaritan Prime chapter 1 . 10/24/2018
I'm sorry- I thought I was supposed to be offended, but I was too busy laughing to be offended.

I'm also convinced that everyone else just got tired of Zuko and Katara's arguing and decided to trick them into resolving the issue by way of playing up their own beliefs to the extreme or just making them up outright.
Brievel chapter 1 . 9/13/2018
Two solutions that occurred to me... tell the kids both myths and let them choose, or present the Fire Nation as being drain blood and Water Tribe as being tears. Heck, add the clay myth and "intelligent animals" in there too.

Sorry, not offended. ;)
Guest chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
ok this was well-written and brought up excellent points... but is it necessary to write something that was purposefully made to be offensive?
RandomShtScinceWhenever chapter 1 . 5/2/2018
Aang and Toph. Just Aang and Toph. They make this piece.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2018
This was hilarious and wonderful. I really can’t come up with much more than that. I will say Suki’s line was the best.
DarkKing009 chapter 1 . 3/13/2017
Beast Zutara ever
FicsFromAnAnbuNin chapter 1 . 3/10/2017
So nothing really for resolved, but that was entertaining.
S. Wright chapter 1 . 11/27/2016
Suki was just nuts. I couldn't stop laughing at her crazy beliefs and poor Sokka's reactions.
maripaz6 chapter 1 . 6/13/2016
Your explanations for Toph, Suki, and Aang just made me laugh so much! Especially Toph's, with her side-comments in parentheses. And Suki, with her reaction to Sokka's beliefs? Hilarious! I am surprised though, that you put Ty Lee and Mai together, but I guess it's possible and you sorta did need a third pair to fulfill the "rule of three".

In conclusion, great job, and I'm personally with Aang.
Data Seeker chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
Hi

I have…mixed feelings on your fic.

In matters of creativity, it has ups and downs. In some moments, the story and writing our simplistic, in other moments, a chord is hit.

The overall plot focusing marriage and religious beliefs.

The beginning with Katara and Zuko arguing about how to raise their children was a nice beginning. Now they are looking for advice.

The part where they meet Aang and Toph was pretty good. They were very in character. Its interesting how they have different views on spirits and the origin of the world and have developed a complicated but working relationship.

The part with Sokka and Suki was interesting. Their views are interesting too- though I think Suki’s basis was pretty cheap.

The part with Ty Lee and Mia was…lets say I have mixed feelings. I don’t like that they are married. But I like the characterization and their clashing world views.

The ending with Zuko and Katara unhappy with their search and come to an understanding was nice.

This is what I think of the wholesome standards.

The language is clean.
Nothing is suggestively offensive.
No extreme violence or any other vile content.
I mentioned that I don’t like Mai and Ty Lee being married. But dislike isn’t the same as disapproval. I am dubious about it, but that’s all.

I hope this review brightens our day. God bless

Data Seeker
featherwizard chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
OK, I totally lost it at "If you hadn't broken my heart and left me for Zuko, I never would have realized the passionate love I had been harboring for Toph ever since we met" and kept laughing through the entire piece. This is a beautiful piece of meta crack fic. As a deeply religious person, well done!
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