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ipsa dixit chapter 1 . 8/1/2017 Starting off: You may be wondering why I'm reviewing something from like 3 years ago, and it's because I was blacklisted from the November fan-favorites on HPFC and now I want to rejoin so I'm getting unblacklisted :) Onto the real review! I've got to admit, I've never read a Harry/charlie, and i don't particularly like the idea of the ship, but this was nice :) question: why couldn't charlie just repair his own bed with magic? i mean, plot, i guess, but wouldn't that just have worked? besides for that, which bugged me a bit, i liked this; it was fluffy and pure :) spag errors 'mum' should be capitalized when ron is saying it |
aino215 chapter 1 . 10/13/2016 you gotta love Molly she is honestly the only person I know of who would break a bed to get to people together:p |
Alytiger chapter 1 . 9/12/2016 Molly Molly Molly, breaking a bed to get them together faster. You are dedicated to marrying off your kids. |
SlytherinEmo chapter 1 . 5/12/2016 I have honesty never considered this pair and all I can say is WOW. It's so cute, I love it! |
Lady Babette chapter 1 . 10/25/2015 Love Molly in this. Epic. |
jwear chapter 1 . 10/21/2015 I love it |
Enjoyfanfiction chapter 1 . 10/18/2015 Terrific. I would love to find out if they have a good life together! |
HA chapter 1 . 7/29/2015 Charlie's my favourite character, so this is perfect! |
Tadpoleinateacup chapter 1 . 12/30/2014 My only conplaint is this should be longer |
public static void chapter 1 . 12/28/2014 Lovely! I love Charlie and the shyness of Harry, resisting the temptation of looking at an almost naked Charlie. You wrote them perfectly and amazingly. The one thing I love the most is Molly thinking of Harry still marrying into the family. The special detail also love is Charlie's dragon tattoo and Harry trying to resist looking at the other wizard. And the ruined bed was a suspicious situation! |
alyssialui chapter 1 . 12/27/2014 Awww shy Harry. Charlie is so commanding and a tease. And then there's Ginny kind of acting like a child and all-knowing and all-seeing Molly. I'm not sure if Molly would approve of this so easily since she seemed hell-bent on marrying Ginny and Harry, but it's your story so you can have an understanding Molly. Overall good job with this. |
wujy chapter 1 . 12/22/2014 There are a lot of things about this that I like. I like Harry's hesitance in the beginning. I love Molly's observant and understanding nature. (And I would expect no less. I love Molly.) I can picture Charlie's dragon tattoo in my head. (Yum!) I would have thought that Ginny wouldn't be so oblivious, but I can honestly say that I like this piece. I'm really wary of slash, especially when it involves Harry, but I enjoy this. It's sweet, with a healthy dose of anticipation, and just a dash of sensuality. Very well done. |
Lara1221 chapter 1 . 12/18/2014 I don't really ship this, but I enjoyed it. Charlie was awesome, and the banter between them had me smiling. I laughed a little at the end - boy who lived twice can't handle himself in the sight of boxers - and overall it was just a fun, well written story. my one critique would be the way he thinks of Ginny now - an obsession entirely on her part; obviously this is a non canon story, but if you're going to include his past relationship with ginny, you may as well describe it for what it was - affection on both parts. |
Laser Lance 720 chapter 1 . 12/14/2014 You write the oddest pairings, but you always write them just so well. I will say that I adore the shift from the awakened/unsure vibe Harry had first in the room, and the eager one he took up at the end. That was nicely dome. Although, I am curious on what damaged that other bed. Could it have all been Charlie's plotting? That sneaky boy. |
Dragonsrule18 chapter 1 . 12/14/2014 Aww! I love this! |