It’s a shame that this story is dead it was quite interesting

Boring

I really don't like the whole Pendragon shit you've written about. It seems really unnecessary and a real waste of time not to mention that it breaks the immersion.
I came here to read a HP fanfiction and not whatever Excalibur useless shit you're going on about.

I would rather that you don't try to force a meeting with Fluer and her family. Such meetings always break the flow of the novel and are cringe worthy.
A normal flow of the story where he meets Fluer in the future during the Triwizard Tournament seems more believable in my opinion.

Why do I get the feeling that baron and peeves are sly gryfs

So earlier you said it was three years of being in this world he came in when the body was 8 and now he is 11 however at the end pf this chapter you said less than a year? Just wondering which one you were gonna stick to.

FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!

ugh no im gonna drop this. the OC is taking too much attention couldn't you make it a girl for fucks sake?

eehhh the Rafael OC is a turn off. Is he a self insert character or something? i couldn't care less about another dude.

Edgy shit plot

Graunt line...Gaunt line
Stickles...Sickles

Lol Harry is BadAss Quidditch Playa :)

Update please?

Having rubidium as a material that the room is made of is beyond stupid. Alkali metals do not do well exposed to air.

in case you dont know
the spelling of debt is wrong everywhere.
you have written it as dePt

this has been an amazing story so far and I'm really enjoying it. I've been reading some of the reviews and some people can only see the worst in things. personally I think this is a masterpiece and I admire your writing skills. the dialogue and interactions are very believable and I love her Harry has a plan for everything and is very strategic. I also like how you have Tonks befriend Harry. I've seen too many stories with Dumbledore being in on the secret and I'm really enjoying him being completely out of the loop. I also really like how Daphne is very suspicious even for a first-year and I'm interested to see where you go with that. not sure how I feel about the whole Harry/Fleur but I like how Harry at least have somebody to help him. I like how you include Rafael in the story. I also really like how Charles has kind of taken the place of Harry while Harry is kind of behind the scenes altering what happens and ensuring everybody's safety and that they are prepared. I also really like the name Hydra. what was your inspiration for that? I really hope you don't abandon the story. and again I'd like to praise you for your writing skills and I hope you have a great day. ignore the haters and keep doing what you're doing:)