chase douglas no no leo

He,the only sane,savior of his family,would bring them all back

Leo

I am really enjoying this story, even though I don't completely understand it. Your chapters have just the right amount of vagueness - a tool that many authors have a hard time mastering, including myself.
I know you probably don't want to talk about this, but I saw some of your flamer reviews in the past, and I was very angry. But I'm really glad you've changed for the better. While your actions as KickandBelli were inexcusable, that doesn't mean they're unforgivable.
Don't forget that your bad choices, your mistakes, make for a great testimony that you can share to help somebody else in the same or similar situation.
You're doing great. :) Keep up the good work.

I liked this. I really did! :) Your grammar is phenomenal, and your wording is just so...GAH! Amazing! :)
I'm looking forward to the next part. And I'm looking forward to any other future stories you may publish.
I'd just like you to know that I was around in the shadows in your past life in this archive, flaming other authors. And even though I'm not an author on this website (I wish I was), you have at least one reviewer who forgives your actions and is completely willing to review your stories without any biases. After all, you are in a new life. :)

Adam? I don't know. You haven't done Leo yet. Is it him? Nice job.

WeddingBands okay, let me think about that...yes, you have decoded all the mysteries in life, everything makes sense now. Thank you. Thank you for your wisdom.

As wonderful and well written this is, i dont get it... But it is amazing! So don't leave thinking i didn't like it because i certainly did! Keep writing!

Is it Leo?

is it chase

Okay - let's see - this one is tricky to decode.
I'm willing to bet this is Leo - just a feeling I've got - and that he's gone to heaven after going insane over his family falling apart. He felt happy until "he" (who I'm also willing to be is Tasha' first husband/Leo's 1st father) appeared and told Leo to leave Heaven because he would feel happy and oblivious while his family gets broken and bitter back down on earth. Leo's father's guilt can never be avenged for leaving Tasha alone on earth so he tells Leo to bring his family back together - if Leo stays too long in Heaven, he will not feel guilt anymore.
And the ending flashback quote: Curiosity . . . brought it back. I love that! Curiosity killed the cat - Leo - who wondered if he could get into heaven from insanity - the curiosity; Satisfaction - that his family will be all right - will bring him back down to Earth. BAM! I BET I'M THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN DECODE YOUR CHAPTERS!

You're right. I'm very confused
Is it Marcus?

Oh gosh this is just so good! This mystery man will save his family! (I think it's Douglas.)
NO! HIATUS! NO NO NO!

Leo was in heaven, yes?

I likes these. Angsty and dark and hopeful too.

Good job!

Oh boy. I am SO betting that it's Leo. I'm SURE of it. Cuz Donald is insane, so it can't be him, and all the others were in their own chapters . . . IT'S LEO! Was he in heaven? Was "he" (who told Leo to go back "down") Leo's 1st dad? MUST KNOW! C'MON! PLEASE UPDATE?