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ugh! this story was AMAZING! ill definitely be reading it again! it ended perfectly! the story was a rollercoaster, lots of emotions but it was incredible. it was done perfectly! good job

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Wow, what a chapter !
I guess you have an epilogue in mind ?

Good, very good plot with bringing the joker back into the fray. And the symbol of having Bruce stepping in rather than Batman was, as well, really symbolic.

Well done !

Yes. Maybe an epilogue with them having children

beautiful honestly i cried :D but any chance of having an epilogue with a mini bruce ?

I loved the ending. The detective part of the chapter was well-thought-out, detailed. All the twists about Thomas Wayne and then leading to the showdown with Cobblepot and Joker. Speaking of, very poetic to end Batman’s career where Joker died (love Gordon for using common sense and ending him). I felt even sadder when Catherine mentioned burning their alter ego’s suit was essentially their funeral. Super emotional but fitting. I’m glad the three are safe, happy, and at home.

Wow, this last chapter made me emotional! I was in the process of rereading this story when you updated! this was a perfect ending to a perfect story. I love how you didn't pull any punches with the darkness and the evil. amazing! I'll miss Cat and Bruce, but I'm glad they have the ending they deserve!

I really hope you haven't abandoned this story, as I have found it to be one of the best on the site. I know it's been a year, so I'm not sure whether I should expect another update, but I can guarantee that me and many others would appreciate one. Great story, hope to be so privileged as to read to the end of the arc.

You seriously need to edit your chapters.

I like your fiction !

update soon!

Alfred Pennyworth

Obsessed!

I want more!

Keeps getting better!