Reviews for Family for Ezra |
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Guest chapter 13 . 4/29 I really liked this chapter and I think it's AWESOME that you put the force awakens characters in here! And yes,you should go save Ezra |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/29 This chapter was really great! Oh, and I'm pretty sure that its spector |
Guest chapter 2 . 4/29 This one was really fun to read! It reminded me of the time I pranked my family. ( I never did that again ) |
Guest chapter 4 . 10/24/2018 it's Spector not sector |
NishaM chapter 5 . 8/20/2018 I'm loving you're story! I would love to see a jealous Hera, if u can. I'm really enjoying the plot, I feel so sorry for poor Ezra. With every good story there's something to improve on, right? Here's some constructive criticism- 1. It's spectre, with an re at the end. 2. You overuse the word electric blue a lot. Please find some synonyms when talking about the colour of Ezra's eyes. Even bright blue works. It doesn't sound as good as electric blue but alternating and using different words not only improves your vocabulary it also enhances your story and makes it more interesting. To finish off my review I just wanted to say thank you so much for bothering to write and put effort in. I can see that you care and that's a beautiful thing so thanks. An avid Rebels and TCW fan, Nisha M. |
Guest chapter 4 . 7/7/2018 Soz it’s Spectre not sector lol! Thanks for writing please correct this soon! |
Guest chapter 10 . 5/22/2018 I would love it if you made that little one shot into a full on story, cause honestly I think that a story based consistently off of that specific subject would be quite hilarious, and also it could dive deep into how Kanan and Hera truly feel about reading this, it feels like it needs continuity |
Guest chapter 10 . 5/3/2018 I would love it if you made that little one shot into a full on story, cause honestly I think that a story based consistently off of that specific subject would be quite hilarious, and also it could dive deep into how Kanan and Hera truly feel about re-raising Ezra as their own son |
ToughLove325 chapter 4 . 9/6/2017 awesome story! I love it |
Marinette chapter 10 . 10/18/2016 I would enjoy a fanfic following this |
SonYukiGoku'sSister chapter 13 . 5/23/2016 YES! YOU SHOULD! Are you going to update soon? Are we going to see more Kanan and hera or are they gone for good? Is Ezra Rey's father in your story? |
Anonymous chapter 13 . 4/21/2016 Yes you should definitely saved Edwards ezra from the trash compactor. |
Lone Laken chapter 12 . 4/17/2016 I'm not allowed to cuss so let me put me freak out in nice, calm words... WHY THE BLEEP WOULD YOU DO THAT! DO YOU KNOW WHAT YOU'RE PUTTING EZRA THROUGH YOU LITTLE BLEEP! WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO HIM HE DIDN'T DESERVE IT BLEEP! (Has moment where I fully except that I have a problem) yikes... |
Guest chapter 5 . 4/6/2016 It's Spector |
Grey Jedi Hazel chapter 5 . 4/1/2016 Just in case it hasn't been answered yet, it is Spectre |