I really like it so far! Please don't abandon this story! I only have one complaint and that's that you made Hannibal and Amy sleep together. Why? It's wrong. Other than that, it was really good. Maybe you could do the tornado version later. It could be a sequel!

I find myself liking this. Write on!

I like the classic thriller feel of this -isolation, confinement, lurking danger, and psychological unrest.
I very curious to see what happens next.

I think I want to hear the tornado story more than about the snow storm. Guess living in an area where we deal with snow all the time, makes this not very exciting. Also I prefer stories with the whole team working together. Not saying your chapter is bad, I like your stories but this won't be my favorite.