This was an amazing chapter. The backstory given to the Trevelyan Mage of Ostwick is just incredible, and I greatly enjoy seeing this character fleshed out. I am curious as to how this character, a mage with military experience prior to becoming the Herald will handle some of the mishaps and blunders that plagued the game's narrative. I eagerly await the next chapter. Thank you for all your work.

Very good chapter I like it. Looking forward for next.

Will there be more? It's a good story.

Awesome

great fic. looking forward to next chapter.

Well, that was pretty disturbing. I knew he wasn't going to have a happy childhood. We know he hates the templars, but it's good to know he doesn't hate Cullen. Another good chapter, as well as the reactions of the companions. He's twenty three years old, Maker, he must be one of the youngest there, I mean Blackwall is over fifty.

Ah Cassandra and her meme, that's bullshit. I'm glad you put that in, very curious as to see what the inquisitor has to say about his life, I do enjoy the party banter between the characters, for me that was one of the best parts in the game. An excellent chapter.