| Reviews for The Sensual and Complicated journey of Aleheather in TDAS |
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   Yeeter than a Heater chapter 18 . 5/10 This is good in concept but everyone is really OOC and hard to like. ESPECIALLY Alejandro and Heather. Heather almost seemed like a caricature of herself, like not even her normal mean, just extremely nasty. And Alejandro just didn’t...I don’t even know how to explain it, but it just didn’t feel like him. It could use a lot of proofreading, too. Sometimes you would have dialogue but you wouldn’t disclose who said what so we had to figure it out based on the patterns of everyone talking. Also the flush of shame sends the characters to random places not the playa. I.e. Alejandro and Heather both got sent to the Yukon on their bonus clips, so that’s where they made up (it’s nothing detrimental to the story just a little fun fact). Aside from the criticism it was decent enough for me to read all 18 chapters! So clearly it wasn’t that bad lol |
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/18 HOT DAMN |
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/6 In this chapter, you said Alejandro never slept with Courtney. Then he says that he wouldn’t sleep with anyone that Duncan touched. But in the last chapter, Alejandro is asked to choose who is better in bed between the two girls. Then Duncan says that he already knows the answer. So, that just kind of confused me. |
| Juh chapter 1 . 2/15/2019 mds q coisa mais linda |
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/17/2018 when is part two |
| Cami0901 chapter 18 . 12/6/2017 Por favor sigue, está muy buena la historia y me encanta el AleHeather, es la única historia de ellos que contre (buena), sigue por favor, deceo poder ver como termina esto |
| Fangirl chapter 18 . 6/12/2017 It's a shame you haven't updated new chapters yet! They really are great! |
| Gerp chapter 18 . 6/12/2017 PLEASE FINISH!We are begging you. It's really amazing(the best fanfiction I've ever read)! SO PLEASE JUST FINISH! |
| TaimmyJ chapter 18 . 4/9/2017 Been just over a year since updated last and it is very good. If you even find the motivation please continue. |
| Manny chapter 1 . 12/29/2016 Can you finish this already! |
| Guest chapter 18 . 8/31/2016 UPDATE PLEASE I LOVE THIS STORY! |
| Snowfur2022 chapter 18 . 8/17/2016 UPDATE THIS STORY NOW! ITS ONE OF MY FAVORITE STORIES ON FAN FICTION DO IT OR ILL SHALL DIE FROM BOREDOM |
| Guest chapter 18 . 7/24/2016 It's really annoying how you forget about this story. |
| Heather chapter 18 . 6/26/2016 UPDATE! This story can't be forgotten again! |
| Guest chapter 18 . 6/9/2016 DONT TELL ME YOU ARE GONNA IGNORE THIS STORY AGAIN! |
