Interesting.
Unusual.

I think I liked it.
You're very descriptive without being overly verbose.
I enjoy your writing style.
Thank you for the lovely fic.

Was not expecting that! I am very curious to know what being a veela would mean for the two of them, as far as a relationship, public knowledge/acceptance, and...well, everything else! I'm very curious. :P

Interesting idea! ...though I must ask, why did her hair get so much darker? Chestnut, if I'm not mistaken, is a very dark brown, is it not?

I want to see more! That was very well written. Props!

Aw, I loved this! Nothing about this life has been normal (starting from his birth...) so why should his relationship and remainder part of his life be? Normal is boring.

This was really sweet. It wasn't over-the-top with flowery, super cheesy and, worse, OOC declarations. I'm looking forward to reading more of your HA! (and Vella!verse ) fics!

I like it!

'Normal' is overrated for these two indeed. Beautiful one-shot.

Nice. Keep it going

Aww yea so exciting please keep going update soon!