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Saj te Gyuhyall chapter 1 . 1/16/2017 Oh, i like this very much. It's always nice to see someone grow up into a better person. :D |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/3/2016 Nice! |
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 1/6/2016 Very good |
seireidoragon chapter 1 . 8/27/2015 This was a great story and I love how Mochida got his redemption. He was a giant jerk in the series but to be fair they are still young and in middle school so it's nice to see him become a much better adult who learned from his mistakes. |
kalmaegi chapter 1 . 12/31/2014 Nobody ever bothered with Mochida, stuck as that one guy who tried to humiliate Tsuna and has been the one used when it comes to TYL!Class reunion fics. Despite the fact he's a senpai. It's kind of weird how no one ever elaborate as to how exactly that senpai was roped into the Vongola famiglia years later. Me? My headcanon was in high school. So it was really nice to see him change and develop as a new man. And my oh my, it just has to Mukuro. Honestly thought the one who would extend a hand would be Takeshi if only because they're both "sword guys" lol even Ryohei. Pineapple was the farthest thing from my mind. |
Cael05 chapter 1 . 11/20/2014 Loved that backstory for Mochida... Really sweet and definitely a touching redemption fic. Good job! I actually want to see interactions in the family now. Hope you'll get to write more. |
Allycat2090 chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 Huh. How unexpected. Have I ever told you how much I adore your spin on characters? Because I really do. I've seen this prompt with Mochida and Vongola before, but they're usually short and focus on Mochida feeling shame for his actions, while also pointing out how far Tsuna's come. I've never read one that actually goes in depth about Mochida and how he could be. So yeah, this was pretty cool. |
SayaNightshade chapter 1 . 11/10/2014 Very great History that explains why in the future, mochida worked for Tsuna! Nice touch with his past! |
ShellyDream chapter 1 . 11/9/2014 Awesome |
Azrayah chapter 1 . 11/9/2014 LOVED IT OMG I COULD TOTALLY SEE THIS HAPPENING! You made Mochida not a douche! I've read a few stories where they make him a grade A douchebag, but you de-douched him! You gave him a reason for the way he acted as well a reason for him to change! I just love this story! Love it! |
Rahxe1182 chapter 1 . 11/9/2014 EEEK! I love it! I was expecting a bit more outright shock though. Kinda like stumbling over his words. But I still love it! Ryuu-chan P.S. Yes, I changed my penname. ) |
stupidlymockingothers chapter 1 . 11/9/2014 This is a oneshot right? Because if it isn't, I would love to see more of this. Like some random snapahots if you will. This is awesome. Thanks for this one Natsu. It brighten up my day:) |
Kanalo chapter 1 . 11/9/2014 You did really good. |
DarkIceAngelFlare chapter 1 . 11/9/2014 This was really cute! Is Mochida really a part of TYL Vongola? I never knew that... I like how you redeemed him in a believable way. Well done! :) |
booklover1209 chapter 1 . 11/9/2014 Wow. Mochida, you were such a brat, but now... Thanks for the story. It was great. I love it. |