So, I finally read all the stories of this crossover, and I just want to say that I loved every one of them. I loved how you pictured Susan, her faith, her manners, and her interactions with the guardians and even with Pitch. To be honest, "Peace" even made me cry a little. So, thank you.

good story, nice way of adding two good piece of literature/film. btw i answer your question about steven universe (So please give it a watch.)

I've been reading your series for so long and I am so glad to see one for Pitch. This is beautiful and Susan knowing how complicated life and each individual is, is something I love. Poor Pitch.

AAAA you wrote more I'm so happy. And this is perfect, yes. You never know if your true strength until you are tested, and Susan has been sore tested indeed. Poor Pitch - everyone gets what they want, in the end.

This is great. Great writing, great musings, great character interplay...

There's a time for action and a time for words. One of my favorite "the batman" cartoon villains was Dr. Hugo Strange. Unlike the majority of foes, he had no combat prowess. Instead, he'd fight with his words. Not a volley of insults and profanity, but observations and cracking at the insecurities his opponents either hid or were unaware of.

A villain that can leverage the weaknesses of a person's character, their regrets, and shortcomings... their verbal blows strike harder and more forcefully than any concussive attack.

In that regard, while this was mostly a battle of philosophy, it still seemed more intense than many a fight scene I've read.

Keep up the great work!