| Reviews for Rebuilding the Uzumaki Clan |
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Autismguy593 chapter 1 . 3/28/2019 like it. |
Borello chapter 1 . 3/9/2019 nice work |
gabelou1991 chapter 1 . 2/27/2019 J'aime beaucoup sauf la dernière partie pas un fan . |
xXUzumakisfanXx chapter 1 . 8/6/2017 I think I saw this chapter in other story :/ That's weird and lame but please update all of your stories! |
KAZEONI chapter 1 . 7/6/2017 Started good but the urination ruined it for me. |
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 12/21/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
zfxgrestgx chapter 1 . 11/19/2016 wtffff thats his mom u sick fuck |
2Lazy2Login chapter 1 . 5/1/2016 You totally ripped off "Whirlpool of love" making this It's the same exact scenes with different names.. It's also crapper in general compared to that story but you copy pasting makes you look terrible.. |
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 2/8/2016 good |
Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 1 . 1/31/2016 too short, like the premise, the water sports was taking things a little far, but I think this should have been spread out more. it needs more detail, especially on the smut content. honestly each girl needs her own chapter before the orgy chapter. a fic like this should have gone, Prologue, girl 1, girl, 2, girl 3, orgy, epilogue. each one its own chapter, and each chapter 3-5'000 word minimum. its not bad, just too rushed and condensed. |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/8/2016 FUCKIN GO TO HELL YOU MOTHERFUCKER |
Spidey2 chapter 1 . 5/5/2015 HOTT! Keep going! |
lemon squeeze chapter 1 . 2/1/2015 Wow, this was really nice. I enjoyed it. |
Guest chapter 1 . 12/21/2014 sorry i miss some things i take back my last review as guest |
CosmicBeing chapter 1 . 11/19/2014 I'd like to find out more of what your death would be like you canon loving Kishimoto cock-sucker. You viral fuckers need to die out already. |