You are an absolute literary genius. I love any and all things you write. You could write a word and I would love it. I read all got stories and this one is my favorite. It is better than all the fanfictions I have read in my years that I've been reading fanfiction. You capture the characters so well. Love it.

You should write another chapter to this amazing shit right here.

One of the best Soul Eater fanfiction I have read. Wonderful job!

This was an extremely interesting read. All the characters seemed to be in-character and your summary was absolutely perfect. There are some things you can work on. I stumbled through some parts of the fic because of typos or confusing phrases. And it may have been the style you were aiming for, but the dialogue could be improved through the use of contractions.

Plot was excellent, but your grammar needs some work. Overall, I'd give this piece a 4/5.

Ugggghhh. This is perf. And beautiful. And amazing. Like where do you come up with all of this?